All Comments on 'The Last Demigod Ch. 02'

You write well but jump around so much that it is hard to follow the story so I am done with this one.

I liked it. But, the other comment about jumping around has a point I think. Maybe some sort of a "chapter heading" or at least a little more clear on the transitions between visions, present time, and flashbacks.

Keep it up though.

Glad to see you are back, and somehow I missed this one over the summer. Please continue; Should we expect the next chapter in about 6-9 months? (Just asking, I understand other distractions, trust me)

Hi Joshmose.

This story hasn't been updated since 2014, where did you get the information that it's been picked up again? I can't seem to find anything on the other chapters, stories or the authors bio page.

Also you commented on this chapter back in 2014 so I'm pretty sure you didn't miss anything.

more please