All Comments on 'The Last Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Good story, but she goes from being blindfolded to opening her eyes and looking at him. That slip up was a little distracting.

wordJunkiewordJunkieover 11 years ago
Great scene...

with action that moves it right along. Thanks for another great read! Don't stay away so long, you've got the goods. Take care and be well -- hcl

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