All Comments on 'The Last School Bus Ride'

by Madabouthair

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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Very well written. Two of my favorite things in the world: hairy and mature.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More

I'd like to hear more about mom and the bus driver...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love the premise and the presentation

I really enjoy stories where the characters are believable with the flaws everybody has because that way I can picture myself as the kid with all his insecurities and could see the woman as a real person.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun story

A mature hairy woman can make a lasting impression on a young lad. Often they will not be attracted to the smooth, shaved types.

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserveover 5 years ago
Addictive read!

Wow, it's like you know I've got a thing for bowl-cutted butch women LOL.

The JCPenney thing is spot-on. Over 20 years ago, one of my HS classmates worked in lingerie and yes, they DO measure some customers (not too sure about now).

This was a nice departure to read about a teen boy's experience even though straight sex doesn't really compute for me. I'm also intrigued about the kid's mom, but at the same time, you got me actually feeling JEALOUS for the boy. I realise that many teens and young adults like to date around and play the field a little though.

I need to start reading the rest of your stories. Thanks for another entertaining read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Terrible Ending

Couldn't get into that ending. Where he just goes home and jacks off to his 1st lover and mother doing it, and he doesn't even care about his mother sleeping with Vivian? Come on, that's not a good enough ending. Could've done better. Was a bit of a sad ending tbh.

bbaron2274bbaron2274almost 3 years ago

Very nice story, has the making of something special!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story.

I'm a hair fetish person.

Armpit hair my weakness.

I spend much time of the foreplay in a women's pit bush.

The dirtier the better.

5***** is a formality.

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