by Pastrylover55
Author only writes WACC stories with the weak husband.
Love to see author fore once write a strong husband that kicks her ass to the curb
Why are you reading the comments if they offend you so much. 1*
I can't make up my mind. Is this this accounting is too short to adequately set the couple's relationship, their emotions about each other and their agreements about openness in sexual matters? Or is it too long and coulda (shoulda) been done in 50 words or less! (My Hotwife got buffed on an almost empty beach in Pisa, Italy by two young Italian surfers, and I watched without anyone knowing! We then ate a wine and cheese lunch!)
Too short, no build up, no back story, just walking around Italy and wife falls down and gets fucked by two guys with huge dicks. Thats just stupid and insulting,-5.
writes to piss people off that is for sure so why let it bother you, i for one am glad that i am not a person that is that simple.
This story seems to have attracted a lot of comments, just because it says it's a true story, it doesn't follow that it is actually a true story.
Problem is that she is cheating, she does not know that he doesn't care, so she is deceiving him....
First off, if she's sending you off to make a damned picnic and you already have the shit in the car, that is already a fucked up part of the story. You pretend to go make a picnic because you know she's gonna fuck 2 guys? They fuck her, but you don't tell her you saw? How far away is that parking lot really? Just a jerk off fantasy so just put more emphasis on her getting fucked because your build up has flaws. As long as you don't incorporate her degrading you while fucking somebody else or the other dude humiliating you or you fucking and suckin some dude's dick....keep trying. Everybody don't always hit it out da park their first at bat. Keep Writing.
Loved reading about an older woman making love to two young studs whilst her husband watched from a distance, every sexy woman's dream.