All Comments on 'The Learning Room Ch. 02'

What a sad story

honestly i think you should take a more "SAW" film approach to this story not the blood and gore parts i mean more of the psychology.

I did not read "The I room", but you are a class act for giving that author credit. This was a very well written, romantic and realistic story. Perhaps people wanted it to be more dark than it was, but too bad for them. Others may have wanted the happily ever after version, but this worked! A gifted writer surprises their readership anytime the author approaches predictability. Keep writing

This story covered a lot: fear, modesty, realization, empathy-driven passion, passion, then a real-life conclusion with friendship and respect being found and shared. Written with feeling, it was a pleasure to read.

Really enjoyed reading this, reminds me a bit of SAW but without the ridiculous violence. Extremely romantic, quite funny at times, and in many ways humbling... however, on a more critic perspective, I thought there was a big shift in Tia, almost too big. She went from being an almost monosyllabic twit, to a certified sexologist in the end. It gave me the idea that to her it was a science experiment, completely coordinated and timed. Aside from that, an altogether great story!

She can end up pregnant! There is no such thing as "pulling out", you can still get pregnant from pre-cum!

I really enjoyed this it was beautiful

Cmon i liked this but couldnt u create another but possibly drag it out longer and not let them sepperate but good job one of the best stories on here

Keep going. New people and see if those two really changed

I loved your story

Amn continue with it it was great but keep going

Awesome story. Well done.

A poor ending then living as one for the rest of the lives would have been much better