All Comments on 'The Lesson'

A few typos but otherwise a great story. You set an excellent pace and it was really captivating. Keep going.

Not what I expected from a Group Sex story set at a high school party... nice plot twist to keep me reading. Keep up the good work!

You are a very good writer as someone said may need some editing but the story seems pretty realistic makes me wish I had been the one to teach you how to give a BJ I am sure you have learned a lot more by now (wink)

Ward

Great dialogue, nice build...

Love this story so much; I come back to it again and again.