All Comments on 'The Library Ch. 01'

I like the story premise, it seems okay, however, i can see this turning into the same horse-dick sex machine crap that's seen everywhere in this genre. If you want help with ideas or proof-reading, e-mail me on salochinpayne@gmail.com.

Best of luck friend.

Some where in it there might be an idea for a story but this mess wasn't it.

Ignore the anons who wouldn't know Lovecraftian writing if it summoned a Great Old One in front of them, clear lack of sophistication. Lol.

There's some very promising setup in this story, looking forward to part 2. Nice to have some original plots.

Please continue... yes, ignore the negativity.. you are doing fine

This story went on and on almost put me to sleep twicee129