All Comments on 'The Licker'

if she had figured out who it was and said something like it being about time he made a move on her or that she was waiting for him to come to her then maybe it could have been more then just a rape by her loving brother

this may have been better received in another category, but I like to venture between them both and love when they intersect....looking to your other contributions...

I had selected this to be in the Reluctance/NonConsent category - not sure why it was placed here. Thank you all for you comments.

I don't speak to Anonymous save this: ....

There will always be negative criticism. I thought this was well written and intriguing. I'd like to see more chapters of this story line. And I've read a bunch on this site.

If this really happened you need to be locked up.

OK, Ryan seemed a bit rough. Now, Ryan also loves his step-sister. Let them bond over this, his new tenderness and willingness to "protect" her, and when they have become tender with each other, and she gives herself to him sexually, he can be very loving toward her. Please give Ryan some chest hair and a dose of tenderness.

Wonderful scheme, great story!!!!

I can't wait to read the next installment

A highly arousing story! Please write a sequel, can't wait to find out what happens! Repeated night Visitations for the naughty ;)

Rape? wtf

This is some smoking hot noncon shizite girl - and I say that as a woman who's into noncon! It's just a fantasy folks - no children/animals/wifi/tablets/phones/laptops were harmed whilst you consumed this story so just chill