All Comments on 'The Loser Ch. 03'

This is the first time I've liked a story enough to comment on it. I just wanted you to know how much I liked it. I think you've got a great idea and need to keep going with it. The plot moves quickly to the goods while maintaining interest. So far I've been impressed with the combination of sexual themes and male-centered release. It really works for me.

we want more! we want more! we want more! a fab story with brilliant twists, more please.

It'd be great to read some more! Help us out, LC!

...with Evil Jack; in other words, make sure to redeem 'good' Jack before it gets too far, or else you lose what you started with...he reader feeling sympathy for Jack.

Not bad so far, can't wait to see what comes next. Also just a thought, maybe you could have jack have a run in with Christie at the mall, and she has developed some kind of feeling towards him, but doesn't want to hurt with evil jack, just a thought its your story.