All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
sweet

More soon please I can't wait

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Orgasmic.

Fuck that guy that has old age; he better not hurt any of that trio. I wanna see how Rainer would get the sword back that should be his by right. The story is so good it keeps me on edge waiting for the next chapter to come out, and it makes my day when I see a new one.

LiterKnightLiterKnightabout 11 years ago
Found it!

So that's where Rainer's sword is. Arazra took it. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'm not trying to offend or be a troll but is English not your first language? Your dialogue is clunky as hell and that's not even considering that you need a good editor for the multitude of typos. I gave you 3 stars because the story-line is interesting and unique...

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