All Comments on 'The Lost World Ch. 02'

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Lucifer16985214Lucifer16985214about 10 years ago
NO

NOT THE CLIFFHANGER! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

LiterKnightLiterKnightabout 10 years ago
Curse you!

TheTask used cliffhanger!

It's super effective!

I hate having cliffhangers like this; they may build up anticipation, but they're really annoying. It must be really annoying for Rainer to have a district leader and an acquaintance killed by an unauthorized angel raid due to a plan that he was going to stop anyways. It'll be interesting to see if he can corrupt Ramiel, if she can raise him, or if they somehow swap places (ie he becomes a raised demon, she becomes a fallen angel). Good work. Keep it up.

MrShadowWolfMrShadowWolfabout 10 years ago

Really a Cliffhanger. Anyway another 5 star story. As for the question you asked at the beginning of this chapter, the ruler of pride. Having the mother-in-law come into the picture could be really funny, and just down right interesting.

ddealddealabout 10 years ago

The fallin angels my favorite other than Rainer... His "wife" is kind of annoying... This series is really AWESOME forward to the nxt 1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it

I love the sequel so much! Damn cliffhangers though... Thank you for continuing the series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Loved it

I loved the sequel, please keep working on more ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great opening chapter

you have much improved the writing from the lost lord to this. im liking the plot :)

AncientKarmaAncientKarmaabout 8 years ago
Dude lol

That ending was amazing. Bravo 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
your answer

id say id love to see more of the mother of the wife of rainer and satan and i absolutely love this story.

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