by TheTask
TheTask used cliffhanger!
It's super effective!
I hate having cliffhangers like this; they may build up anticipation, but they're really annoying. It must be really annoying for Rainer to have a district leader and an acquaintance killed by an unauthorized angel raid due to a plan that he was going to stop anyways. It'll be interesting to see if he can corrupt Ramiel, if she can raise him, or if they somehow swap places (ie he becomes a raised demon, she becomes a fallen angel). Good work. Keep it up.
Really a Cliffhanger. Anyway another 5 star story. As for the question you asked at the beginning of this chapter, the ruler of pride. Having the mother-in-law come into the picture could be really funny, and just down right interesting.
The fallin angels my favorite other than Rainer... His "wife" is kind of annoying... This series is really AWESOME forward to the nxt 1
I love the sequel so much! Damn cliffhangers though... Thank you for continuing the series.
you have much improved the writing from the lost lord to this. im liking the plot :)
id say id love to see more of the mother of the wife of rainer and satan and i absolutely love this story.