All Comments on 'The Loving Husband Ch. 04'

I wish you would do some proof reading of your work. Your stories would improve 100%.

This is a great story and really deserves to be continued, hopefully without deteriorating into the hackneyed interracial gangbang.

This was a good story, it shows a husbands love can go a long way, but everything has a storing place or a line to be crossed and she crosses it and lost everything.

Great Story! Keep it going.

I wondered how Tommy could stand to watch Lou fuck Tony over and over again. It would be hard to put up with. And Lou became the cheating slut she was all along. I hope Tony doesn't fall in the same trap that Tommy did.

wife got what she deserved and she hurt a very loving man in the process

It had to happen like this. She even didn't plead to her husband to take her back, she just wanted sexual gratification.

I wonder what will happen to Louis? It seems now that even Tony alone can't satisfy her. I guess multiple partners at the same time will be good for her..Tony will not make the stupid mistake to marry her, just to fuck her at the side...

Liked the ending. I don't like the suggestion that swinging itself is evil, with the whole "you broke my heart by asking for another man in bed" deal, but this woman wasn't content with swinging- she wanted to mock, insult, and cheat on him. Still, I would think that she would say more. That she didn't just shows what little she actually felt for him. And sadly, some guys would act like Tony, let their ethics be overwhelmed by their desire for a certain woman.

Too many authors on this site write crap about cheating spouses without any consequences to the marriage. I am glad that you have taken a stand against that kind of story. I hope that you continue to write stories with consequences, either good or bad.

If you write another chapter, I hope that the guy Tony will think with his big head instead of the little one. The wife is obviously a slut and cares nothing for anything but pleasure.

Thanks for your change to a theme of consequence. I hope there is no additional chapter.

Your sexual desriptions are quite (not quiet)(not quit)vivid. Learn to apply the same diligence to the balance of the story and you will improve even more. Spellcheck can't do what an editor can do(see above correct spellings with different meanings). An editor also is someone you can bounce content or format variations off (not of).

Again, thanks for the change from cuckolding to a theme of reality and consequence. Regards

Thank you. I read the first part, figured it was another "dime

a dozen" wimp hubby stories and dropped it. Luckily I noticed

this chapter. It was a great ending, wish we had more like it.

This is what would happen with most marriages in the real

world and you handled it just about right. Thanks again...

The story was well written, but why did it take Tommy so long to throw her out. I would have dumped her ass in chapter 2. Louise humiliated, debased and otherwise showed complete contempt for Tommy. Even after he told her they were through, she didn't seem to give a damn other than to feel relieved that he was not going to interfere with her fucking. I have never hit a woman, but in Louise's case, I would make an exception and kick her ass around the block. the Ct. Yankee

WHEN A MARRIED WOMAN ASK HER HUBBY FOR ANOTHER MAN IN THERE BEDROOM,THERE IS NO MARRIAGE AS DEFINE BY WEBSTER DICIONARY.MARRIAGE IS WHEN TWO PEOPLE COME TOGETHER AS ONE.FOR HIM LETTING THAT HAPPEN HE WAS WEAK FOR NOT SAYING NO.TONY WAS CRAZY FOR GOING ALONG WITH IT WHEN HE SAW TOMMIE ACTIONS.HE SHOULD PUNISH TONY ALSO.

But I always love the anonymous comments:

LOOK SHE WAS A WHORE FROM THE START

01/12/05 by Anonymous in USA

It was a fuckin' story dude(tte)-either get a life, or if you can't deal with fiction stories, what are you doing here in the first place! Anonymous is good though-everyone would know where to find you if you used a screen name-damn I need a Smilie to do an eyeroll here!

Thanks for the story. Making the other man a somewhat sympathetic and somewhat reluctant participant rather than just an anonymous 'big cock' made this story different and enjoyable. Desperation and need push people to strange places and 'love' requires acts of shame as well as courage. Whew....! That was profound huh!? Tommy will be careful what he agrees to with his next wife (if there is one) and Tony (Big Tony?) is lucky Tommy showed up with a lawyer and a camera rather than a pistol. Great fun! Thanks again

We always hear of a man thinking with the little head instead of the big head. In this case the woman thought of the bigt cock filling her cunt. /she was so proficient that she could take off work to fuck without her husband. Who took care of paying the Bills? she used Tom from the time she took Tony to lunch, ststing she could handle Tommy.

great sex... almost XXX... u r good at it.... better write only sex scenes.. then u don't have to concentrate on the plotline of stories... really, ur stories suck.... but, great sex....

hey, i haven't commented on any of ur stories before.... beacause, i thought i should take time and read ur stories with carefull attention... which i believe i did... first of all, let me say that - u r not a good erotica writer, not even close, erotica is of passions and events which dwell with love and desire ... u haven't showed that sign in any genre... better to suffice, u r a very good pornstory writer, where morals are necessarily absent and lack of human sanity is essential.. ur sex scenes are good, probably great... u have surpassed many in that area... but, emotions and events that led us to those scenes eventually make a reader almost nonplussed and a bit annoyed... i should particularly talk on ur Loving Wives stories... u see, all of these stories have same patterns... big cock, sudden sluttish attitude and heartbreak of a purely gentle and innocent male... don't u think if anyone knows that he or she can't stay true or they are not just of faithful type, then they shouldn't have chosen the path of relationship or marriage? if any one, like female characters, likes just to fuck and get orgasms, then let be it.... why bother with marriage or something? if that's what they want, give them that chance... i just don't understand, why they marry? ur female characters ceratinly have the greatest sexual appetites and they would like to meet that by getting big, bigger and biggest cocks ..... and, the most upsetting fact with ur writing is - u have tried to justified that... well, if u r singly, do whatever u want, go for 15" black cocks... but, why u do that in a marriage? that's why ur characters are insane like u.... never try to justify that.. u r preaching slut behaviour.... that's not just good... however, who am i to tell these? it's just that when i see people are voting quite generously for ur stories, i get a bit hurt that how can people support things like u advocated.... in literotica, i am particularly happy to see that almost 99% readers are against cheating and they are at it very firmly which assures that themes u profess are yet far off to come to reality....

if u r a male, then, ur pattern tells us that u got this treatment urself from someone u loved and now trying to create that vile character with contempt which we feel too to those characters...

and, if u r a female, which is a big possibility, u urself betrayed someone for a bigger dick... and, u, pathetically, tried to justify some of it, the betrayal.... the orgasmic bliss and better sex turned to have priority over a marriage that the female character chose previously... it's again a shame that in ur stories, female characters are nothing but pieces of meats... always wanting to mate and breed with a better specimen of the opposite sex... and that's why, when ur female characters utter the words 'i love u' or 'love', it is pretty evidient to the readers of my like, that she loves bigger cock and more and more intercourse.. the concept of love in ur storeis is quite bizzare to me and frankly unusual... oh, if u mean, physical love, then, i understand... but, otherwise, my head hurts....

and cheated husbands were portrayed poorly... husbands with small dicks and warmth of a good person.... have u done it intentionally to hurt guys? because, no man really is a wimp... a person may have a beautiful wife, if she cheats.. that shows her character... and, who doesn't know, however great a person's physical attraction can be, if u want to be with that person, he or she has to have good and great characteristics too... beauty doesn't always feed...

however, u and another almost insance Loving Wives writer vastiesmith are quite similar.. even ur and her location in ur biographies are identical.... u both have quite evidently shown us that yes there are really beautiful (outwardly women out there who are full of sexual desire and that only.... u two have shown that women are pieces of meat only... with no heartfelt warmth, true feelings... perhaps i am wasting these... u know, from ur writngs, i have come to realize that there are people who relate to the word Love completely in the physical sort of way... and, a whorish sort of way of course...

pls, do read Mused or Bob Clark Jr. or VetigoJ or haremgirl's stories.. then, u may improve some... the first three dealt with incest... but there also lies the greatness of human mind, how much we are capable of loving the people we care for... do read....

i am earnestly hoping a reply... if u feel upto it... but, pls try to feel the fact that sex is just a part of life, not the core... with ur talent, u could produce great stories.... which i hope u would someday.... and, don't degrade woman that much... most of the woman and man for that matter don't love because of cock size or tit size.... love is something u can't explain...

if i have talked too much, pardon me.... but, ur stories do tend to make people believe that u r insane... hopelessly...

and, last but not the least, human beings are vindictive, the way ur female cheaters get away is quite unbelievable... things really don't happen like that.. measures are always taken.... i suppose it has to do with u again... u urself perhaps got away with it....

bye...

thelonewalker@literotica.com

great sex... almost XXX... u r good at it.... better write only sex scenes.. then u don't have to concentrate on the plotline of stories... really, ur stories suck.... but, great sex....

hey, i haven't commented on any of ur stories before.... beacause, i thought i should take time and read ur stories with carefull attention... which i believe i did... first of all, let me say that - u r not a good erotica writer, not even close, erotica is of passions and events which dwell with love and desire ... u haven't showed that sign in any genre... better to suffice, u r a very good pornstory writer, where morals are necessarily absent and lack of human sanity is essential.. ur sex scenes are good, probably great... u have surpassed many in that area... but, emotions and events that led us to those scenes eventually make a reader almost nonplussed and a bit annoyed... i should particularly talk on ur Loving Wives stories... u see, all of these stories have same patterns... big cock, sudden sluttish attitude and heartbreak of a purely gentle and innocent male... don't u think if anyone knows that he or she can't stay true or they are not just of faithful type, then they shouldn't have chosen the path of relationship or marriage? if any one, like female characters, likes just to fuck and get orgasms, then let be it.... why bother with marriage or something? if that's what they want, give them that chance... i just don't understand, why they marry? ur female characters ceratinly have the greatest sexual appetites and they would like to meet that by getting big, bigger and biggest cocks ..... and, the most upsetting fact with ur writing is - u have tried to justified that... well, if u r singly, do whatever u want, go for 15" black cocks... but, why u do that in a marriage? that's why ur characters are insane like u.... never try to justify that.. u r preaching slut behaviour.... that's not just good... however, who am i to tell these? it's just that when i see people are voting quite generously for ur stories, i get a bit hurt that how can people support things like u advocated.... in literotica, i am particularly happy to see that almost 99% readers are against cheating and they are at it very firmly which assures that themes u profess are yet far off to come to reality....

if u r a male, then, ur pattern tells us that u got this treatment urself from someone u loved and now trying to create that vile character with contempt which we feel too to those characters...

and, if u r a female, which is a big possibility, u urself betrayed someone for a bigger dick... and, u, pathetically, tried to justify some of it, the betrayal.... the orgasmic bliss and better sex turned to have priority over a marriage that the female character chose previously... it's again a shame that in ur stories, female characters are nothing but pieces of meats... always wanting to mate and breed with a better specimen of the opposite sex... and that's why, when ur female characters utter the words 'i love u' or 'love', it is pretty evidient to the readers of my like, that she loves bigger cock and more and more intercourse.. the concept of love in ur storeis is quite bizzare to me and frankly unusual... oh, if u mean, physical love, then, i understand... but, otherwise, my head hurts....

and cheated husbands were portrayed poorly... husbands with small dicks and warmth of a good person.... have u done it intentionally to hurt guys? because, no man really is a wimp... a person may have a beautiful wife, if she cheats.. that shows her character... and, who doesn't know, however great a person's physical attraction can be, if u want to be with that person, he or she has to have good and great characteristics too... beauty doesn't always feed...

however, u and another almost insance Loving Wives writer vastiesmith are quite similar.. even ur and her location in ur biographies are identical.... u both have quite evidently shown us that yes there are really beautiful (outwardly women out there who are full of sexual desire and that only.... u two have shown that women are pieces of meat only... with no heartfelt warmth, true feelings... perhaps i am wasting these... u know, from ur writngs, i have come to realize that there are people who relate to the word Love completely in the physical sort of way... and, a whorish sort of way of course...

pls, do read Mused or Bob Clark Jr. or VetigoJ or haremgirl's stories.. then, u may improve some... the first three dealt with incest... but there also lies the greatness of human mind, how much we are capable of loving the people we care for... do read....

i am earnestly hoping a reply... if u feel upto it... but, pls try to feel the fact that sex is just a part of life, not the core... with ur talent, u could produce great stories.... which i hope u would someday.... and, don't degrade woman that much... most of the woman and man for that matter don't love because of cock size or tit size.... love is something u can't explain...

if i have talked too much, pardon me.... but, ur stories do tend to make people believe that u r insane... hopelessly...

and, last but not the least, human beings are vindictive, the way ur female cheaters get away is quite unbelievable... things really don't happen like that.. measures are always taken.... i suppose it has to do with u again... u urself perhaps got away with it....

bye...

thelonewalker@literotica.com

he get off watching his wife been fucked by another man.watching another man fucking his wife get mad at her and pat the man on the back.coward of a fag,but he wanted the man to fuck him too.

The tiny plot (unlike all the huge organs in the sex scenes) does not stick or justify the huge body of repeated copulations. It ends up being boring.

oh? she is a piece of shit! ...........

quote, he loved his wife so much he let her bring another man into their bed.....where the love in her being a whore.

One extra star for Tommy divorcing her. Fuck her. Do a ch.5 with her whoring on the streets. That's about all she deserves. One more thing, make sure her pimp gives her guys with small dicks.

HA

I enjoyed it because finally a cuckhold husband who acted like a man. I also enjoyed Tony's positive perception of Tommy and his attempt to not to humilate him. I liked reading about the situation from Tony's perception.

Please do all of us a favor and don't read any more of this writter's stories. Your dumbass comments take away from a great story about love and sadness and repaying that d\sadness! You both together couldn't write a fucking sentence,.

Good job. A chuck with a backbone and a bull with a heart. This is probably the only story on Lit like this - refreshing. 5x5

Bulls are men, cuckolds are men, and as men they surprise us when we less expect...

Those asses who say they'd never forgive have never loved anyone not even themselves. I feel sorry for them.

But for the cuck to continue to enable a whore of a wife while she does bad things to him grates on my common sense. So for this husband to finally come to his senses and do what was needed to protect himself, was a brilliant end. The more I live the more I realize that women are whores by nature. Don't believe me? Spend some time with a single mom. They will use whatever they can to land a provider.

Men know this subconsciously which is why they write all these stories. The willing cucks just have given up their manhood. Too hard to fight anymore.

This story made absolutely no sense at all. Needyou needs to try again.

Slut wife needs a wimpy cuck to support her so she can sleep with other men. Why doesn’t she become single and be the whore she wants to be. Oh wait, why would she do that when she can find pathetic people cuck to pay her bills while she plays the field. Just another example how cucks truly are second class citizens in their own lives.

Tommy shouldn't have waited 10 miserable months to divorce her,. After the first time, he was NOT comfortable, but the wimp "loves" her, but she doesn't love or respect him at all. Tony is just an bastard with NO morals. He knew Tommy wasn't happy with HER arrangement but he has no scriptures, so he went along with screwing the slut. Glad this pathetic story ended in a good way, but will Tony be a fool and marry that cheating slut?

Right down the toilet with a really bad cuck story.

Awful Cuck story, unfinished too and worst of all untagged.

Scores 1/5 and deservedly so.

I enjoyed the story, and finally it took the turn that I was hoping it would. Tony was as big an idiot as Tommy. He knew she was breaking the rules but instead of going with his gut, he went with his dick, and it cost him more because he broke Tommy’s trust. Tony should have walked out of the house and say no I am not doing this to Tommy. If you want to fuck someone while he’s away find somebody else, I was a little disappointed in the writing of Tony’s character, because he had showed some sense of morality and a reluctance to be used just as a human dildo. The other thing that confused me at the end well actually throughout the story, you never gave anymore information of references about the place. They both worked together, and they seem to be able to take time off work whenever they wanted to. It would’ve been better to have some workplace interaction, so other people knew exactly what was going on between the two of them. This would’ve been another way for Tommy to have more control of the situation if there was fear of Tony or Lou losing their job. I sure am glad there were no children involved. Maybe you should write the next chapter which she’s pregnant with twins one being Tommy and one being Tony’s and how she gets as fat as a cow and couldn’t get a man to look at her ass, if she dropped her knickers and stuck it in his nose.