All Comments on 'The Man by the Water'

Great story, great visuals! I was totally absorbed by the story and was disappointed when it ended. Thanks for contributing!

I really enjoyed this! Well written and vivid!

Good writing, good story. What happens next?

Awesome story! I loved how it was so plausible. I could see that happening in real life. The thing that got me about the story was how worked up he got thinking about her, and the camel toe that he just saw, and the fact that he wasn't able to continue his run. I think most men have been in that situation, so you hit the nail right on the head. Great job with the story Kee.

yep, your story did in fact turn me on. please write more.

p.s. maybe u could put a CFNM scene in it (just one of my personal fav genres) :P

very well written and credible. Looking forward to more from you.