All Comments on 'The Man Of The House'

Great story. They both knew what was going to happen from the moment they stepped out on to the dance floor. You made the sex happen in such a natural way and you made it into a beautiful thing -- just the way it should be.

Very sweet and erotic.

I enjoyed the story very much.

Thanks for the great read

sweet and hot ...

Outstanding! Very sensual...

than getting stuck up his mom's juicy cum-filled (by daddy) cunt.

Very good, got me hard!

God Damn this is good.

5* x10

That was awesome!

I enjoyed this greatly. This is the type of story one can accept as realistic.Great job. Thanks. Ready for your next work.

Very erotic! I really enjoyed the details of their lovemaking. (Female ejaculation and toe sucking are hot.)

The story-line was plausible and steamy. The tale didn't drag on interminably with too much exposition. In fact it never seemed to bog down - I never lost interest.

This was so well written, I kind of wonder if you're a professional author.

...for the flat-screen TV - of 40 years ago!

fag writer

"You're the most beautiful thirty eight year old woman I know"

Yep, there's a 37 year old, and a 39 year old much more beautiful - but 38 year olds? You're the best! ???

Sorry, couldn't read past this ridiculous statement - beauty is not conditional on age!!!

Ready for your next one

You were building a neat little m/s fantasy situation there, then Junior starts to relish licking up his own spunk. Sorry, ain't my boat. You should warn your readers up front that you write semi-gay male fantasy or whatever you want to call it.

Not condemning you, just not expecting sausages in my salad when selecting m/s erotica.

Agree with Anon before me, a guy eating spunk -anyone's spunk- is disgusting, you should give warning in the beginning.

...on the gay issue. This is a fabulous story of hot motherfucking. Get that? Mother (female) her boy (male). So it's heterosexual fucking of the best kind---son into mom fucking. A boy's big stiff prick enters his mommy's very wet twat and said boy blows his young balls up the world's greatest twat---his own mother's. If there's a gay element here it's in the subconscious minds of a few sexually disoriented commenters.

Friggin homophobes. If you've never made love to a woman and accidently tasted your own seed, you've done a piss poor job.

Stop being so closed minded.

nothing as good as eating your own cum from your moms pussy.

you would think at the end that a mother and son duo would at least take a break

from each other to try other relationships..

40 years would have made her 78 years old at the end..

to be supposedly that faithful for a son and mother is a miracle

deserves to be split up into at least two additional chapters or three

one where the mother and son casually add another woman , mother's sister

boy's aunt.....

another where the mother is in her mi8d 60's and still in good shape

and a final chapter when she is in her mid 70's , maybe add a few pounds to

to the mother's figure

story is very good , could be better ...worth the additions , wait for more

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I have eaten my cum off a woman's lips or out of their pussy many times. If you don't kiss a woman after she sucks your dick she might think that you don't really appreciate her getting it in her mouth. I have heard of husbands that won't let their wives kiss them after a BJ until they go to BR and brush their teeth etc. What a bunch of woosies. You have probably eaten another man's cum out of a woman if you get around much (or your wife has wet-decked you). Be brave, don't worry about it. Of course, if you SEE cum in there and you didn't just fuck her, that is the time to just leave her ass, forever. Any woman that would deliberately do that to you is not worth keeping around for any purpose. I hear there are some men that like to do that but .I have never (in lo these many years) heard one admit it.

A really good story there, pennylesspauper. I got tied up by other comments, sorry.

As a male there are not many who understand what a woman really needs to loved properly. The trigger zones are very important and you have described them well. It's too bad that 98% of males out there don't care or understand this as you do. The woman has to get something out of this, be it any kind of love making and it's more than just male needs. WELL DONE.

It was a very good story and well written with only a few grammatical errors. It is more than obvious that you are knowledgeable about pleasing a woman and a big part of that was putting her needs before yours.

I'll look for more of your work, now and in the future.

It is an awesome thing when in just a moment one becomes man of the house and head of the family. Dad left the day after I turned 18 and mom told me of my changed status - if I wished it. I moved into the master bedroom that night and, as in the story, remained there by mom's side until her death. As we made love that night she told me that if I wanted her she would make me a loving and faithful wife for as long as she lived. And she did just that. Of course, she already had known how I felt about her for since I was 13. Love, sex, career, children, bills, mortgages, the stuff of life descended immediately but I had a partner who was experienced at it all already. This is a great story of a good son. He did not try to userp his father's position while he was there and the wife remained faithful until he left. I've enjoyed this as it brings back memories.

Very hot story. I love stories like this when the son becomes the man of the house and has to fullfill all of it's duties.

I loved every word and turn of events. In fact, I read this twice and picked up a couple of innuendos and acts that I missed the first time. As a matter of fact, I really was hoping that you would not finish this yet and create a few more chapters. I imagined that the son, the only reference to his name is 'slugger', and took total control of his mother and started a series of activities like that. Totally enthralled with your writing. This is that good a story. I truly love different age love stories and this is a great one.

Congratulations!

Who the fuck goes to a nice restaurant and orders their steak well-done? That's some low-class trailer trash shit right there. You might as well just ask for some beef jerky and a bottle of ketchup. Disgusting.

for me I do NOT care for raw meat and think of canibles when I see blood thirsty eaters

I thought the ending finished far too abruptly, still you got ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ from me...

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

For all those that say it's homophobic to not want a man's cum in my mouth is idiotic. It's not a fear a homosexuals it's a personal preference to not enjoy anything related to homosexuality.a man swallowing semen is a homosexual act.hell I don't really like blow jobs because it doesn't do anything for me,but I enjoy being face down on a well groomed pussy.so stop using phobia if you're not smart enough to know what it means.

what 19 or 20 year old boy/man wears pajamas, especially after his mom rents a porno for them to watch