by Scorpius1945
I’ve now realised that I’ve been reading and commenting on the wrong story. I’ve confused the Mandy Chronicles with Holiday Loving. How stupid can you be? 🙄. So looking at the Mandy Chronicles in the proper context I still feel that the first chapter deserved the 5 stars that I gave it but, because of my mistake, I criticised the next two on the wrong premise because I expected the story to go in another direction entirely. As a series that appeals to someone who likes nonstop sex scenes it’s fine. So I apologise profusely to the author for my comments and scoring on chapters 2 & 3.
Another marvelous chapter in the Mandy Chronicles, superbly written by a very talented author. Plot and love scenes are interwoven very skillfully, and are in exactly the right proportion to one another to advance the story in the best possible way. Five stars.