by nitegazer
good plot but very short story, should be more descriptive
Wow. That kicked ass. A little short, but there could be more to come...I hope. Very hot.
Please give us the tastes, smells, colors, fears, and feelings. Slow down and savor the building psycological changes occuring with the drugs and then the sex. You have us, and we understand, but the detail of the experience could go much farther.
A lovley realxed style about your story telling. Would like to have known more about your looks and how you felt though. Did they have to drug you? I think it would have been more horny if they'd let you experience it with ice cold clarity.
No wonder you enjoyed that tale of mine so much, I do need to continue it. Now that I have some time.
Hot story, wish there was more of it. I would have liked to read about her being fucked in diferent positions and bondages. Nice setup, and the Master can offer me absinthe anytime!
Halloween Special Treat....I loved that story the most and really liked reading your other stories!!!! Please keep writing, as I'll keep reading and voting. Thank you!!!
this is one of the best pieces I have read, please write more tales of the mansion on the hill