All Comments on 'The Massage'

after writing for numerous websites the one critique i would like to say is that you should use detail and describe the emotions.

i would set the scene and be descriptive such as you come home from another hard day and the office and see the candlelit room. you sink into the chair waiting near the table and sigh as you see me enter. smiling weakly you succumb to my ministrations as i stand behind the chair and touch your shoulders... gently at first but with an increasing intensity as i find your trigger points and slowly release your tension. I can feel your body melt as my fingers go deeper into the muscles.

by the way I was a massuese years back. the best description is that massage is a prayer over the body...

be well sbab