All Comments on 'The Massage'

No second person. No present tense. First or third person past tense. Jesus. Telling people what they did? If I was there, why do I need you to tell me? I wasn't there, so give up this foolishness.

My bf encouraged me to receive an erotic massage while on a vacation 3 years ago. He watched me get thoroughly pleasured by my hunky masseur's fingers, mouth and cock (with condom). Bf and I loved it. Now, it is a regular part of our getaways. The voyeur in my man and the submissive exhibitionist in me are totally satisfied in a wonderfully erotic way. Write more. 5*s

your story sucks

Any partner that brings a male massage therapist slash lover into home and is taken without partner approval isn't a partner. Husband being and allows bareback from what will turn out to be a gigalo yuck.

Really nasty stuff. Amoral characters.

What should we do with stories like that crap??!! Avoid!!!

1*

*1 I wish there was a lower score or maybe the ability to kick you right off this site!!!!

So you fools thought this was the 3rd grade play written up for your pleasure? Put down your cocks and wipe yourselves off before you mess up the keyboard. You know you loved it.

until the husband reveals his cuckold nature and the reason the wife has taken a real man as her lover.

If you have never lovingly watched your lover experience orgasmic bliss with another man or a woman, I can tell you that it is a sweet moment. I am not a "cuck", but I desire pure pleasure for my wife, and if someone else can deliver that for her, I have recently discovered that my consent is as loving as my touch when we make love to each other. My wife, it turns out loves to see me in the throws of ecstasy with other women and men too. This is a recent revelation to both of us. I only wish we came to that knowledge years ago. My advice to you who object is to shed your possessiveness and open to pure love in all of its manifestations. You will be rewarded with much pleasure and much love. Only petty jealousy can rob you of that.

As Kimi said:

"No second person. No present tense. First or third person past tense. Jesus. Telling people what they did? If I was there, why do I need you to tell me? I wasn't there, so give up this foolishness."

Not only that, but addressing the story to "you" (in this case a wife) makes it irrelevant to the large proportion of readers who aren't somebody's wife.

The only way to make this sort of one-sided conversation work is to have it as an overheard discussion with one partner mute, or have it as a written letter. Maybe somebody could do it as a Bob Newhart-style one-sided telephone conversation? That could be a classic.

Otherwise, as Kimi (who tends to be rather direct in her comments) said: "give up this foolishness".

Lue

Pure shit! No star.

Been so long since I’ve been on here and now reading all of these comments reminds me why I stopped coming here or submitting stories.