All Comments on 'The Massage'

by jmc11

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mannydcampmannydcampalmost 20 years ago
Cute

Cute and different but you could have done more with it.

GoodWifeyGoodWifeyalmost 20 years ago
This story would have been interesting

If we knew whether the massuer was or was not her husband.

Otherwise it's just a ho-hum description of a massge.

StoneyLodgeStoneyLodgeover 13 years ago
Very nice

Enjoyed the imagery. Check out my story, "The Massage Gambit" for a different take!

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