All Comments on 'The Matashar'

I like how this is starting. There are so many posibilities open to it at this point. I'm looking forward to more.

at last!! what looks to be an interesting sci-fi story. i of course am hoping for a little hot sex thrown in for fun but this looks to be a story with a PLOT!! keep it coming!! write quickly!!

this should be a fun story to read.

Hey Sam,

The opening was a teaser, but my suggestion to you is to get your story up quickly. Unless you do that, folks are going to lose interest.

Cheers,

Sam

Kick ass dude, I like the way this is going. Haven't seen a good story like this for a while so dont disappoint :)

if this is your teaser... then i cant wait for the bulk of the story... keep it coming

So many good concepts. Too bad you don't know how to actually write past the introduction of a story.