by ItsaWash
Excellent story! You really have a handle on the language of Serenity--I could hear the characters in my mind. I hope you continue the fun between Kaylee and Jayne! I want to read what happens when Jayne takes control.
Great story! What a sexy hunk Jayne is, no wonder kayleigh couldn't keep her hands off him, wonderful dialogue you've got both characters playing the parts perfectly. Smart attention to detail aswell, Jaynes inverted left nipple and dislike of snogging - though i'm sure Kayleigh will get her way on that issue! Thankyou so much for this story i look forward to reading more episodes
I'm more of a Rayne fan myself but damn... I'd consider writing some Kaylee/Jayne after reading this... Delicious!!
I never really put Jayne/Kaylee together in my head, but this was fantastic. You really wrote them true to character, and the whole thing worked really well. Very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
From a fellow browncoat, I have to tell you how much I loved this one! I've always had a thing for Jayne myself. I found your tone and language to be totally fitting of the Firefly world, and the descriptives were believable for both characters. Well told, deliciously steamy... you've got a new fan starting now. Here's hoping for more stories in the same realm!