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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pushes my buttons.

Pretty nice story. I could really imagine myself in poor Woody's situation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
50s Swimming Stories !!

Naked naked naked

More soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice cliffhanger

But I sure hope you don't leave us hanging like this. That's always the worst possible ending to any story, especially to those I like so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Suits vs skins

Very well written story. More interaction between the two squads would've been nice. Writing felt like I was in the pool with them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This chapter gets me every time. The fact that there's one girl who makes the decision to keep training naked despite the boys being there. I would have liked to know more background, like did she prefer being nude? Or did she not own a suit? Or did she forget it?

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