by AnonymousPerv
This chapter gets me every time. The fact that there's one girl who makes the decision to keep training naked despite the boys being there. I would have liked to know more background, like did she prefer being nude? Or did she not own a suit? Or did she forget it?
Very well written story. More interaction between the two squads would've been nice. Writing felt like I was in the pool with them.
But I sure hope you don't leave us hanging like this. That's always the worst possible ending to any story, especially to those I like so much.
Pretty nice story. I could really imagine myself in poor Woody's situation.