All Comments on 'The Meeting Ch. 01'

But mistress (lower case intentional) ignores the safe word and it is the sub's fault there is blood...oh well, no big deal... ? Fine to want to be extreme, but if this is how things start, I'll not continue. I wish you the best as a developing author.

It was too difficult to read with the poor editing

The first meeting is so bizzare. Unless they had already decided to do the little show at the coffee shop, this was coercion and by the thoughts of the sub I highly doubt they did, which was stupid on the Domme's part.

And seriously? The threat of punishment before the rules are even discussed? She's a terrible Domme. Subs aren't mind readers

Dear Author, please get some actual working experience about how BDSM works before you write about it.