All Comments on 'The Memories'

l liked the story the way it was written gave it what I call the trueness where I felt as if I was watching from across the room. Would like to see some more of your work soon. Maybe a little longer next time but thank you for the pleasure that I had reading it.

This was a good short story about orgasm. To get better you will need to add substance or drama to get the reader's anxiety up.

Good luck and thanks for your effort

A little awkward in places, especially the part about the condom. Was never sure what the relationship was between these two.

Your writing has promise.