All Comments on 'The Minister Ch. 02'

9 times out of 10, slower pace is better.

Heath is a jerk, could be drama there.

Happy endings rock.

Get an editor, there were a few sentence spelling and errors.

More please. Off to a nice start.

You either need an editor or you need to read through it a couple times before posting.

Please make up your mind. There is a difference in beliefs and requirements of catholisism versus other denominations on appropriate behavior.

Write more!!!

3.5* Better, but you still write without knowledge. Cheerleadwrs don't wear uniforms to practice. Seriously, your main character is an underage girl who has her own apartment in the city? Is your hunky older guy a Catholic priest or a Protestant minister? Huge difference!