All Comments on 'The Mistress Submits Pt. 01'

Can't wait for more :)

Very well written, I can't wait for more.

Surprisingly similar with me and my current Master. Except the problem was drinking, not smoking, and we met in a group chat.

Delicate intro, from a mild breeze gathering subtly into a cool forecast of more turbulent gales of excitements to follow. "Prepare for heavy weather" as seasoned voyagers might say. Our course is now set truly into the storm so bring it on.

I've played with and studied hypnosis. That was a pretty fast induction. Obviously it was not Mistress Suzzie's first time under, because it takes longer the first time.

I was a little confused by the wording about the fingertips, but otherwise this was a great read. It left me wanting more.