All Comments on 'The Mixer'

by paula_b

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great writing!

Paula's writing was excellent (particular the ending). Check her bio and note her picture. She looks good enough to eat; finely aged pussy is the best!

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 7 years ago
love it, so hot

I really wish that our family had been close enough to at least talk about everything.. even sweeter if we had been close enough to help with personal matters like that.. a pussy loving son..

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 7 years ago

It's an interesting concept, with a slight twist at the end of the tale. I enjoyed it, but it seemed a little rushed to be truthful.

Great profile pic by the way! xx

trigudistrigudisover 7 years ago
With You Being A Female Writer...

I'm a little surprised you haven't posted a taboo from the mom's POV yet. In my opinion, stories penned by women are always sexier from the woman's perspective.

DougntexasDougntexasover 7 years ago
DougNTexas

Great story, just about 5 times to short.

curiousboy40curiousboy40over 7 years ago
too short

should've been 2 pages at least.

more plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
catchy

Loved the twist at the end, nice work.

VegasMike155VegasMike155over 7 years ago
Nice Twist Ending But...

I thought the ending was clever and I did kind of enjoy it and got a chuckle out of it. But, man! I was really looking forward to them going to The Mixer! Oh well. Maybe a story for another time.

blackknight314blackknight314over 7 years ago
Nice twist at the end.

I liked the story, but it seemed a little too short. Stories are always too short for me though. I thought it interesting that you as a female writer wrote from the son's perspective. Good job! Loved the profile picture... you have me drooling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Comments already on the site...

have said every thing I could. I love mother/son incest because it was my first sexual experience

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More

Another chapter would be good.

cookie404cookie404almost 5 years ago
Clever

You have taken a break from writing. Hopefully you'll return.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice Story

Brings back memories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The Mixer

I truly love this story . The son looking after his Mother’s needs . A second chapter could have the son increasing his devotion to his mother and her happiness to the point of a full time commitment .

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

For the first time, I found a story that was both sensual and funny. This was a novel twist. The author has a wonderful imagination. A5 star rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes liked the ending and didn't see it coming. You should write more but a bit longer stories

smooth_Ballssmooth_Ballsover 1 year ago

fun ending of the story.

So they both had thought about it and the sex club was just to bring the topic on the table.

And mom and son arrange it aall right in front of dad, only he doesnt understand. Hot

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