by Harry1988
If it is you should know that a question is punctuated with a question mark.
"30 mins" may be fine for texting, but not for a story.
"He used to constantly fantasise about that moment when he would knock on the door, Karen and says the Sam was out but you could come in and wait for him."
That doesn't even make sense. It looks as though you either don't know how to write coherently in English, or that you just don't give a damn.