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He growled loudly as his long awaited climax finally began to crest. Angie's body reacted to his primal roar by taking her through a hard and fast release of her own.
"FUCK! OH FUCK! FUUUUUUUUCCCKK!!! I'MMM CUMMMMING!!!!"
Ed grabbed her big tits and squeezed them in his big hands and Angie shook harder. He lowered her against his chest and they relaxed that way, breathing hard.
Angie felt his softening cock slip from her pussy and sighed contentedly.
Finally she pushed herself up and off of him. Zoe moved in with a warm damp facecloth and wiped Ed's face clean. Then she moved to wash his cock and balls but stopped when she felt new life begin to twitch in his cock.
Ed gestured for Zoe to join him on the bed and pulled her against his body when she did. He kissed her tenderly and she smiled blissfully as she rested against his chest.
He turned and pulled Angie to him for a kiss as well. Her lips were so soft. She snuggled in on his other side and soon both women were snoring gently.
Ed was tired as well but his scattered thoughts kept him awake. It had been an eventful week.
Work was good, he loved his job, and it looked like he would get to do some more interesting tasks. He was also getting excellent pay.
With the extra income from Zoe's restaurant he was no longer worried about Grace's education fund!
His stupid Christmas gifts turned out to not be funny at all but were surprisingly well received just the same. Weird!
Victoria was back and part of their family.
But the most incredible news was that he was going to be a Dad! He was excited and worried at the same time which was so confusing! He was so glad that Grace and Rachel would be there to help him.
He loved hanging out with Stephanie's kids and even Carolyn's though he had to think hard about what might interest them, their reactions were so different from his!
He really thought he'd neglected his friends considering all the wonderful things they did for him and Grace. But they all disagreed. Each was grateful for how he shared his life with them. He found that odd because he was grateful for being allowed to share theirs. Rachel's words came back to him and he had to agree with her.
Time really was the most valuable gift of all.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoWhat a personal odessey from such a creative mind.
I wonder how much research the author had to experience to detail the sex, emotions, and complex relationships of a polyamorus (harem?).
oksideshow8594196 months agoWow I'm really surprised on how well written this story is. As of 12/02/2023 this is longest I have no correction that I have to on literotica website (using Microsoft edge read aloud) but yet after the story ended it didn't seem like enough time pass to the length of the story. So I say great job on this story and keep up the good works of art with your words
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Old_Lion6 months agoWhy do so many (seemingly American) Authors have problems with spouses that have passed away? A Woman whose partner (male or female) has died is called a WIDOW. A Male who partner has died is called a WIDOWER. RINSE AND REPEAT PLEASE ALL AUTHORS!!
RanDog0256 months agoJust finished another read of this chapter and my mind hasn't changed, you're a genius! Another 5
Michael56Smith7 months agoOOPS! sorry to pass on false information BRS, I must have gotten you confused with another wonderful writer, ... too bad you are not having to spend a fortune on books and tuition, you are really missing out, ... so much to gripe and complain over, ... I'll try and do better in the future, ... but your tales are still mighty awesome, and I have bought a few from Amazon myself, ... I think it's a good deal, ... ;-) ttfn
Michael56Smith7 months ago-- I'd venture to say that The Most Valuable Gift of All is BurntRedstone's writings, .... All are wonderful, well written and entertaining, ... and so much is available for free on sites like Literotica (where I discovered his stories, ... thank you Annabelle Hawthorne), .... how can you beat both wonderful and free? You just cannot, ...
-- Many of his writings are now available on Amazon's digital books, you can help to support our fantastic author (he is paying for kids' college) and have your very own copies of his best stories to devour, I like that, ... There are quite a few great little 'one of' tales and several amazingly complex series as well, his stories are all treasures to be enjoyed, .... ;-) ttfn
RanDog0258 months agoMy god you are a fucking genius! I've never witnessed this level of brilliance at Literotica. Puurfect! I can't get enough of your stories. Thank you BRS. going through all your stories for the third time and enjoying every page of each of your stories. Another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
Anonymous8 months agoto all the negative commenters this fiction and some extremely steamy sex throughout . all i can say is most of us men would be extremely jealous and wish it was
Anonymous9 months agoWhile I agree with NickCave from 3 months ago that the Rachel character is interesting, I find it hard to believe that she did not suffer any guilt or consequences, even in her own mind, for totally letting Ed, and Grace, down in Barbados. She promised she would take care of Ed, but what did she do ? She let him go almost totally wild drunk, and then abandoned him to a drunk woman. Rachel should be in the doghouse for a long time for what she did, or failed to do. She was not being a good friend to Ed and Grace, that's for sure.
BarryAllen8889 months agoAlso, you frequently write passively:
āSoon everyone WAS enjoying the wonderful food and drink and conversation WAS light and fun.
Victoria WAS enjoying the wine and her relief at being accepted WAS so complete it made her almost giddy.ā
Write more actively:
ā Everyone ENJOYED the wonderful food and drink and conversation FLOWED EASILY.
Victoria RELISHED the wine; her relief at being accepted by this close-knit group of friends MADE her almost giddy.ā
BarryAllen8889 months agoNot sure if older comments mentioned this, but I struggle with nearly all the antagonists DYING. Sergo, Greg, the judge, etc.
Fun overall fantasy story, but set āin the real worldā, but villains being repeatedly shot by their jilted spouses is a bit overboard for this series.
NickCave11 months agoI've been enjoying the story just fine, but there is one thing that does bother me. I could see in the beginning, this would be expected, but now that they supposedly love and care for Ed you'd think the women would stop treating him like a piece of meat. The man is in severe pain and can't even walk and all Zoe & Angie are worried about is getting his big dick in their cum dumpsters. You can't give the guy a day or two to fuckin' heal? It's funny that the woman who loves him the most, the best woman of the bunch, Grace, not only treats Ed like a human being and not a walking dick, but she shouldn't be 100% fine with whatever Ed does whenever he does it. I swear, Grace has the least amount of sex with Ed among the group. Rachel has developed into a great character. Sure, you could say it's because she has Ed living with her, but it's much more than that and she's going to prove it by helping Grace and Ed raise those babies. Rachel is awesome.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoLove your writing and your stories, which includes this series, of course. I have to admit though, that every now and then it felt a bit creepy. A bunch of rich cougar-ish women, desperate for huge rock-hard meat, swooning at the merest of kisses delivered by an indigent simpleminded man-child body-builder HVAC savant, whose instant and interminable ginormous erection takes them all to nirvana, whenever they desire.
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I guess it's the fact that Ed is presented, over and over, as an easily confused dewy-eyed teen who'll do whatever these rich women want, without question. They're obviously taking advantage of his nature, they all know it, but it's in a good way (wink wink nudge nudge). I don't know, just feels creepy after a while.
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Also, rich people don't share anything with anybody. Women don't share lovers, unless they don't care about them at all, and all these women are supposedly in love with him, or at least his horse-sized manhood. No way IRL, could these women be in the same room without going after each other with beer can openers and stun-guns.
