by BareBackRider2
The story was great, I loved the action of the mud, and how the women gave herself to it. Hope you make more stories like this
Great Story So very erotic being taken by an unhumanly creature. Maybe she will become pregant with some kind of unworldly creature that she will have to explain to her family. Great Job. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
I like especially how the end is open - this way, one can go on thinking about what could happen!
I constantly find myself coming back to this story to read it again and again over the years, it's a work of art.
I really enjoyed this story! I'd like to know what happens next. But while reading your story, I felt a sort of "like-mindedness" with you.
I love fantasizing about creatures or alien...things...taking advantage of a woman. I should write some of mine as well!
Cool stuff man! Let me know if/when you post some more!