All Comments on 'The Mysterious Touch Ch. 04'

just notice this stories and read all the chp it was going good at 1-3 but this chp 4 make me kinda sad since the MC sharing girl with other guy. i know maybe it is just matter of prevalence or different of culture but i never like a stories where a guy share his woman. so i am gonna rate it low.

""I'm not forcing their bodies to do something their mind doesn't want to do. I'm literally changing what their mind wants."

That's even worse than controlling their bodies. It's hot for interested readers, but it's pretty unrealistic to think his friend would feel BETTER because of that explanation.

I hate the idée of sharing that power

how can you believe a man would share that ?

he'd keep that for him except for the case of passing the power of course

Loved it, great writing as always!

I know you put out a lot of great chapters super fast, so I can understand if you need to take a break but if you wouldn't mind just letting your readers know if you are working on a new chapter or should I stop checking for a time on your stories.