All Comments on 'The Mysterious Touch Ch. 05'

I liked this chapter a lot but I must say I also like his conquest of people a lot. I like the possibility of a nice guy ending but I hope not too nice... Whatever you end up doing though. I am here waiting for more chapters of all your stories.

You gave her herpes? Wow, what a way to throw a bucket of cold water over any eroticism! Lol.

Thanks so much for your feedback. This chapter helped Ty to learn some things that will change in the next chapter. I hope you like it.

Realy enjoing this story.I think Ty is basicaly a good guy.Thinking would he like it if somebody forced him to become a murdered,a child molestor,or even gay if he didn't want to be! So he should set himself a Code of Practice ! where his power is only used in a Win Win Situation Only. He can still have fun! Yet protect the womens phyicaly and emotionaly and not interfer in a currant or possible love life. And aspiring for the moral high ground. He may also device a reset phrase and also have them forget if he slipped up.

Out of hundreds of stories I've read here, this is the first to mention a disease.

What a buzzkill...