All Comments on 'The Naughty Wife Pt. 01'

Incest trumps bdsm. Kink of choice aside, this is cringe worthy in its style. By the time he was spanking the paralegal, I was skipping and skimming. Very stiff in the descriptions, dialogue and action. It reads as if a gunnery Sargent were relating it. Nothing about William makes it believable that grown women, including the daughters, would go along with his discipline. What you try to convey as mastery comes across as having a stick up his ass. The women are all portrayed as brainless, brainwashed idiots mesmerized by him. It's creepy, not sexy.

...and the daughters were in a school with uniforms at 20? They still live at home five years later...obviously a piss poor father role model for them. Very silly indeed...would be better under Mind Control.

Totally childish and unbelievable. What woman in her right mind would allow this man to walk into her office and treat her like that, marry him 2 months later and allow him to treat her grown daughters like that? Didn't even make it half way through the story and gave up.

I for one would love to be treated like this, I think every naughty girl should be punished by any means necessary. Nothing wrong with using discipline to correct ones behaviour. Absolutely love all these stories and my fave author. Can't wait for more! Xx

5- (4.6 = 92% = A)