All Comments on 'The Neighbor Ch. 01'

Look forward to more!

This is a pretty weak story. Stupid in fact. Needs so much more.

Loved it

I think I'll pass on future chapters.

The first paragraph alone is a mess. Jamal has been starred in at least 10,000 stories here (ok maybe only 5000). You brought nothing new to the most overdone set of cliche's on Lit.

1*

Have you ever actually worked your magic on a real woman's body? Oddly enough, banal, mindless, unedited shit like this, often gets high ratings. The world is full of booger eating morons.