All Comments on 'The New Nanny'

by wildpussycat

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Non-consent???

Not a single element of reluctance or non-consent in this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good start

I'd like to have seen her protest, and then be made to cum against her will.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not much of a story. More a scene from a story. I would have expected some dialog...

...something about her POV, some more apt description of the look on her face after they parted when he looked back. I would have expected her to be more verbal, more expressive.

This was more like a photograph than anything else I can describe. It was empty, incomplete, two dimensional.....a lost opportunity to be something more.

Sorry, it was a disappointment.

No. Thank. You.

kinkboikinkboialmost 7 years ago
Blah

She submits to him immediately and he doesn't even make her cum. Blah.

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