by wildpussycat
I'd like to have seen her protest, and then be made to cum against her will.
...something about her POV, some more apt description of the look on her face after they parted when he looked back. I would have expected her to be more verbal, more expressive.
This was more like a photograph than anything else I can describe. It was empty, incomplete, two dimensional.....a lost opportunity to be something more.
Sorry, it was a disappointment.
No. Thank. You.