All Comments on 'The New Owners - 02 February'

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goamz86goamz86over 13 years ago
Fantatstic

I love the build up. I love the conflict. I love the submissiveness. I cant wait to read Ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
feedback

Brilliant! I wish more stories had this sort of "scene setting" but I have to admit to being very disappointed that there isn't chapter 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6 with the promise of many more.

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