All Comments on 'The New Pastor'

I see no problem, they just join one of the more liberal denominations like the unitarians, epsicopalians or Presbyterian (USA). Good story. I Hope youcontinue this story over the course of severa chapters. You have a great story line developing.

Pretty good start. A little bit rushed. About how old is Debbie? Consider using one of the volunteer editors for future submissions.

Over all the plot of the story is interesting and progressing. However, the story needs some polish for grammar and word usage. Develop your characters more than the breast size. Give your readers a more complete picture of their appearance as well as emotional complexity. Why are they both have erotic dreams about one another? Will look forward to the rest of the story.