by markbrownbear
This is nothing but another willing cuckold story! Even though there are no tags to indicate it, it is nothing but another piece of trash.
Saved me from reading it. BTW Literotica has five posted stories today in Loving Wives All five are cuckold stories. What has hppened here? STOP!!!!!!!!!!!
Are you a man or a fag to write such garbage. If this turns you on go see a shrink and get you fried brain fixed..it's a shame you write such trash!
Obviously no one in Cuckerotica cares a damn about readers. That seems to be the only possible answer to the question, why those wimp- and cuckoldloving "writers" don´t have an own section here. It cannot be a technical question; Many readers (like me) wouldn´t need more than a few hours at the most (incl. transfers) to add that category.
Apart from that I don´t have a clue as to why someone who barely manages to write down a few sentences gets calles " a writer". A story, read within 4 minutes, isn´t a story, really.
I feel sorry that "Wimp-erotica" loses more and more niveau.
I have 7 stories on SOL. My problem is the lack of native speaking editor. My all stories are cheating wives change to other women stories. The editors of Lit did not approve not native speaking edited stories. I sent my stories a lot of editore candidates and everybody disapeared after it...........My Hungarian helper is trying to edit my 8th story. She mended only my grammar.
I reader buddy from Nebraska promised he help me with my 6th story "The Two Wimps". I hope he will not disapear.
Good story but lacking enough description and dialogue. Would've like the recanting to have lasted longer and been a bit more descriptive. Also dialogue between the characters was good but could've been better.
As to the Nay Sayers the Loving Wives Catagory is described as - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. If you are looking for monogamous relationships try some evangelical erotica site I'm sure something like that exists somewhere on the net.
As for EgoTrixi's comment. Maybe when you start submitting your own stories you'll have room to talk.
I love it. Please don't listen to the assholes. Just keep writing. Especially, continue this story.
It's not a bad thing but it is time to come out of the closet.
someone please fuck my wife for me.where these sick fucks come from.
This must be cockold friday, do all you fags drink together and bet who can write the worst piece of shit? Well, you might win, brown streak.
This site is attracting braindead cuckold lovers like shit attracts flies.
I am someone who views a long term girlfriend as a common law wife. So right cat, . But what is disappointing is the level, any level of erotica. I want to stand up and lift the table with my hard on whilst doing so. On that basis 2* keep writing. I like the tatto and the artist's desire to see the result of his craft This coulda been so much better this had erotic potential but author took it down a beaten track. ok 3*
If you don't like these stories, why do you read them? Anyone with half a brain could tell they're cuckold stories. Of course that might be your problem. It must be depressing to go through life as an ugly, angry half wit.
I'm sure you'd be much happier with a btb story so you can Jack off while you read about another half wit like youself beating up his wife or girlfriend.
The usual "1" of course.
My wife doesnt have a tatoo but does come home drunk with her cunt full of cum and I love her telling me what she did and letting me lick the cum from her cunt. This is the best turn on. She now says that she wants me to watch her getting fucked and to suck the guys cock for her. Cant wait!
Seriously though, why waste time having a flower tattooed on her when she could have gone straight to the heart of it and had CHEATING CUNT Tattooed on her worthless hide in the first place. That way Brad might have given hubby a discount when he tattooed FUCKING WIMP on the stupid bastards forehead.
Her new tattoo should read Divorced Whore, but the poor useless cuck will probably stay with her.
Lol, the 26th troll is back. He loves reading this genre and then, maybe out of guilt at his enjoyment of something otherwise forbidden, has to trash what he loves.
Good erotic writing. Thanks
The anonymous bitch follows me around, nose always up my ass, just wishing he were me.