All Comments on 'The New Teacher'

by shannonkelly

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FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
Welcome, shannonkelly, and thank you!

That was a lovely story, especially as a first offering. You really should consider taking this one further. Very well done -- five stars and favourited!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very nice

Look forward to hearing more. Perhaps just my personal taste, but I prefer a little more subtlety in these type of stories. If she thinks it's a lesson, have her more uncomfortable with some requests... Perhaps have to be *persuaded* to go along. Dont just jump straight to complete gangbang right off the bat.

Also, get in her head a bit and explain how she views exposing herself as being necessary for teaching some subject. Teacher Undressed is a great story in this vein. If you decide to continue this story, consider having her receptiveness be much lower without the deep voice present. She can still be influenced, just not as completely controlled as by him.

Again, good story to start with. Looking forward to more.

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