All Comments on 'The New Warden'

Good start, needs more chapters after this introduction.

Great start. Please continue, it has the making of a fantastic story

This is good, and I am interested in seeing how it goes, but please, for the love of all tbings good in this world, USE QUOTATION MARKS!!!!!

Maybe surprise the former warden by revealing that the new prisoner really is the Governor's undercover corrections officer to discover all of the warden's mistreatment of prisoners & now is officially the new Warden who will be allowed to use all of the old warden's humiliating control measures on her and all participating guards while they are now held under arrest awaiting investigation results & trial while confined in the very prison that they performed their dastardly deeds! My recommendation only for an interesting 2d Chapter - or more!

really nice turnabout short story! Thanks and all the best