All Comments on 'The Night Ch. 03'

Hi,

I like your story line. But they way you present the different points of view is redundant and confusing and makes for a story that you have to concentrate on reading instead of just being able to read and enjoy.

I LOVE how you give BOTH points of view. That is the point of reading, is to MAKE yourself THINK!

LOVE how you give BOTH his and her view of the same situation. A story should make on THINK!