All Comments on 'The Night I Cheated'

by Marriedgirl_23

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nothing new to read here.

This is all we seem to get anymore, half hearted, weak attempts at writing half a story and not even accomplishing that.

oatzaboatzabover 6 years ago
A few CFU Clamydia

I wish many contracheating occassions for the husband before divorce in an imagined sequel!

It would be nice the husband gives clamydia to the cheater wife after some contracheating before divorce!

The clamydia infection do not disturb the fertility of the man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
???

I fail to see why this story (if you can call it a story) was written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
he called her a slut because...

she really IS a slut?

hope her husband finds out and kicks her useless ass to the curb

lissa1101lissa1101over 6 years ago

I liked the story. The other people who commented either ya'll are a bunch of prudes or jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
In less than a week shes fucking her neighbour

And still manages to say she doesnt regret getting married?

What. The. Fuck? She doesnt even feel guilty for cheating on her husband of 8 months and you want us to believe shes happily married?

Da’fuq is wrong with you?

Impo_64Impo_64over 6 years ago
This story was too long...

This story was too long...half a page would be enough to tell it all...Thinking it better, just one phrase was enough: "I married a man I loved very much and was my life and in just 8 months I cheated on him and got pregnant by my lover, showing how strong my love was."...1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Probably the writer of this story is young

Just saying. In this place in time, 2017, this crap happens. I am aware of military couples following the tenor of the story. 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck SHIT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WOW

You come to a cuckold sex site and read cuckold sex stories and cry and cry you hate cuck stories yet you come back every day doing the same thing.

All five stars here..

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Reading?

I haven't read this yet, based on the comments not sure if I want to, but I had to comment on the description!

"The first time I ever cheated on my husband"

The FIRST TIME?! Once wasn't enough?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Thoughts

Decided it was short enough to give it a shot!

Wow! He saw her ass and camel toe in her yoga pants; as good a reason to cheat as any I've seen here!

"I thought there's no way I should go to a costume party with another man" - Why not? Unless you're already planning to cheat!

They "shouldn't have done that," but are IMMEDIATELY doing it again?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story

Yes there are stories just like this, Soldier deploys, wife lonely add alcohol and mix well makes instant adultery. For reality, sadly happens a lot not just with military also in civilian life too. Now with technology the next part has the two men video taping with their cell phones and posting, youtube, facebook and other what's happening in your area or this evening websites. Next you have a husband training at sea, and yes some of these websites can be views on the internet even at sea, and since the small town is in my opinion a small military town, I am sure the videos will make their way to web sites visited by military men and women. With that the husband finds it or is shown by accident and recognizes his wife, like wise in another part of the country some client or clients see the video and accidently share with Emma whom also recognizes Ryan's car and too recognizes Aly and Ryan. The ending is never fun and worse I am sure the neighbors also know. This will have the making of a bitter and painful ending for two couples. I am sure Emma supports Ryan, and of course Daniel supports Aly and if not married long she will get nothing in regards to benefits and any support. The military frowns on adultery although Aly cannot be court martialed for adultery, the JAG will make it difficult to get any support from her husband while serving and will expose or embarrass Aly with pictures and image of an adulterous spouse while husband is deployed. Gave the story 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Actually she only cheated once

because after the divorce, in which she of course got nothing except the bastard child she conceived, cheating was no longer the proper term for her continued slutty behavior. Prostitution allows for loose morals without cheating being involved.

She'll do okay as long as she stays healthy and moves to a Navy town and gets regular STD testing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
good first story

Would love a sequel

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 6 years ago
Scum of the Earth

Cheating on deployed military spouses (men or women) is disgusting and never to be applauded. Her husband's military friends will find out and tell him. They will get good old Ryan in an alley, crush his genitals and beat him to mush. The husband out at sea has a great alibi. When he comes home he will throw her cheating ass out and find a better woman. Will she still think it was so great then?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It's funny

It's just so funny to see people who come to a porn site to read fictional stories and masturbate, get bent out of shape about the content of said FICTIONAL stories. "It's wrong to cheat on a military spouse." Maybe it's also wrong to read porn and masturbate without telling your spouse. Hmmmmm. Get over yourselves you self-righteous pricks.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "It's funny"

This is NOT a "porn" site, it's an erotic literature site, LIT-erotica, get it?

Maybe YOU come here to "read fictional stories and masturbate," but you don't get to decide what our reasons are for being here.

So why don't YOU just quietly jerk off to the cuck stories you must love, god knows there are enough of them here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

so erotic and sexy, got me going so good.

I respectfully request you write more stories.

You have a very erotic way of putting things!

YechesemYechesemover 6 years ago
Marvelous Night Out

So erotic and sexy and wonderful. I loved it. I want the same

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well done!

I wish my wife could tell a story that well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot

Looking forward to the next installment of your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bitch

All that I can say is that there are too many married spouses that are already cheating on military members. You are already in danger and missing home to find out that you married a whore. Not a good combination.

ju8streadingju8streadingover 6 years ago

i see divorce on its way

afanoffanlitafanoffanlitover 6 years ago
Can't wait to read how she pays for cheating...

Her husband is serving and she's whoring...hope she ends up on her ass with nothing.

IrrumatioIrrumatioover 6 years ago
Totally unfinished

The crux of a cheating-spouse story is the consequences. "I got hot and fucked my hunky neighbor" isn't much of a tale. What happened after is the real story.

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
What are your preferred 'consequences', Irrumatio?

You say: "The crux of a cheating-spouse story is the consequences."

What if the consequence was 'they all lived happily ever after'?

It does happen, you know.

Lue

lgustosmiolgustosmioover 6 years ago
Enjoyable and Accurate

Enjoyed reading the story, found it to be a fairly accurate depiction how many deployed military folks return home to find their left behind loving spouses in precisely the same condition as when they left, that condition being well fucked. Now, of course, we all know of the strict chastity and fidelity those deployed folks display while on the long, boring deployments. Oh, I guess they may slip once... or twice... or, oh hell, how about every chance they get! I've spent the better part of the last 60 years either on active duty or around active duty people, and while there are those who remain chaste and faithful, they are far out numbered by those who do not, both the at home and the deployed.

Regarding the comments this work is not a literary classic, well, perhaps I'm under the wrong impression but I don't read the works here expecting to find epic literature. The name of the site is Literotica, not Literepics. And while some proclaimed epic authors contribute to the site, that is only judged by the standards of the site, not by any marketable standard. The works here are meant to be enjoyable for the reader and the author. As stated earlier, the story was fun to read, and I believe the author enjoyed creating it. And for those who did not enjoy the reading, unless you have constructive comments for the author, please shut up and go on to find something you do enjoy.

YechesemYechesemover 6 years ago

This type of setting doesn't only happen in the military. It can come about by work alcoholic who enjoy their work and take their families for granted. Loneliness, disappointment, fears have a way to bring about situations where you would never think you would cheat. Finding someone who makes you as excited or more excited and gives you the time and attention you believe you deserve works upon these types of encounters. I liked the story, the setting, the fire, the sex. I will read more of your stories.

Richie4110Richie4110over 6 years ago
Hot Hot Hotp

Fun read😈

Full marks

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hot story/forgot the pill/ turned into a slut/

so when is the divorce/a solder can seek all kinds of revenge. now preggie,stupid she could go to the drug store that part is so dumb. from drunk to a sex maniac where reality here.???????

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
Well, at least it wasn't her referring to her "married pussy"

In this story it was him: "I'm going to cum in your married, slutty pussy."

What about her other bits? Are they married too?

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Three days later...

... they found the whore and her pimp dead in the streets. They had been lapidated. Their young lifes ended abruptly and they reaped what they sowed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
True ending

What I didn't know was Daniel came home early and caught me sleeping with Ryan.Daniel ripped Ryan out of the bed and crushed both of his testicles with a well placed kick. Ryan cried and moaned like a little bitch while I stared in shock at what my husband was doing. I tried to get up and stop my loving husband but he was in such a fit of rage that he roundhouse kicked me in the side of the head. I slowly lost consciousness only hearing the wails of Ryan crying for his mother.FML

You guessed it, I was pregnant and Daniel divorced me. The judge thought so lowly of me that he gave Ryan 100% of our belongings. My parents and sibling disowned me along with my friends. 6 months after the fiasco I had a miscarriage and also my jaw never quite was set right after the roundhouse. The police refused to press charges on Daniel and instead charged me with some 200 year old adultery charges. FML

Ryan never got hard again and left the country about the same time I was sentenced to 1 year in a women's correctional facility. When I got out I begged Daniel to take me back and he roundhouse kicked me again for good measure. By then he had married Emma and they were expecting triplets. I cried because my face hurt and I couldn't have children anymore. FML

I then decided to vent my frustrationions on the internet and took up the penname "Marriedgirl_23". I have no friends. I have no family. Men won't even look at me because of my horribly disfigured jaw. I hate my life. FML

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yuck!

I pray to god your husband is making a cuckquean of you right this moment.

badidea211badidea211over 6 years ago
Loved it!

Made me wet. What a delicious story. Thank you :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Two Stars

The story is about some slut with no self respect. In a real life situation the guy she was with would be bragging about what a slut she was, and ridiculing her husband. Women like this have no business being married.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You did well. Its almost an exact copy.

I don't know who did the original, but the whore wife cheating on the deployed service man is a classic. Yours reads just like all the rest, a very faithful almost word for word duplicate. I can hardly tell it from the original.

Just one more velvet Elvis on the side of the road, collecting dust, and snickers. I just hope you didn't invest too much time in this. I'm pretty sure no one else did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
young slut

doesn't care about her husband and will be divorced within a few years. This is not an entertaining sooty but, a story about a slut who could not keep her marriage vowels and decided to get her pleasure. Let's see how she handles the situation when her husband finds out about her skank way and finds pussy on the side every night of the week. This kind of betrayal is some of the worst crap on this site but, I guess it does happen with foolish people. Hard to give it more than a one star.

CaOldDogCaOldDogover 6 years ago
Wrong title

This should have been the "night I through my marriage away". There is no redeeming value to the slut young wife with only divorce regret.

CaOldDogCaOldDogover 6 years ago
Solid minus 5

I just don't understand how the score for a wife cheating on her husband that is serving in harms way can be viewed as anything other than minus 5?

26thNC26thNCover 6 years ago
Minus 5

What sick mind made you think this story was a good idea. Whore wife of deployed sailor cheating less than a week after he is gone. If, by some small chance, this is a true story, I hope you and your fellow cheater die in fire.

itsayouitsayouover 6 years ago
Like others have asked why get married.

Save aggravation just get divorced.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Puritain reading literotica

This is good story. Sexy and I’m afraid so common. This is the only week point. But I’m very surprised by comments. If you touch the US army guys, is it so chocking!?

Please don’t get offended just by fucking stories on literotica !!! This is not good place as you are already have some kind of naughty ideas and that site has many morally inappropriate novels. Just don’t read them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Love this story. Great theme and well written. Looking forward to the next instalment!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF?

Is it supposed to be hotter or is it just more fucking sickening that she cheats on her husband when he's on DEPOLYMENT?

Maybe her "confession", should have had an ounce of remorse to it.

And some people wonder why BTB fans get so irate?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not unusual

I am a military wife and wives being fucked while husbands are away is the norm, especially if living in military housing. Some men encourage their wives to fuck others and then send them pics or vids of the fun. It is very obvious that the great majority of negative commenters have no idea of what happens when husbands/wives are deployed. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I don’t condone adultery......and wish military husbands and wives could remain...

...faithful during deployments and other separations. But many, dare I say most, do not.

The situations are very, very tough on both spouses and there are more than enough temptations in the separations.

That said, and with all due consideration, this was a hot scene.

I felt the ending was a little too abrupt...hoping you’ll tell more of the story...as this was really just a beginning.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Get over it!

Story was decent. A bit long winded, but decent none the less.

What kills me is the comments. All of you trashing military spouses, you know nothing about the military life style. All you hear about is the wives that cheat while their husbands are away. Well let me let you in on a little secret... the soldiers cheat too! They cheat when they're stateside and they definitely cheat while deployed. They cheat with female soldiers, they cheat with civilian contractors, they even cheat with civilians in the community in which they're stationed. That's why my ex is my ex. He was the cheating whore, not me. So get the hell off your high horse and stop judging!

PerilEyesPerilEyesover 6 years ago
Good stuff

Keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The Romance section exists

For all of the readers who just can’t stand to read about unfaithful wives, yet they all seem to be here.

Yeah, she cheated. She was young, he was absent, she got horny and seduced. That’s pretty typical, and anyone who is shocked is too young to be reading here. Why it’s somehow worse because he’s deployed military is beyond me. Do you think it’s somehow OK if he’s away because he got locked up?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "The Romance section exists"

"For all of the readers who just can’t stand to read about unfaithful wives, yet they all seem to be here."

It's NOT that we can't stand to read about unfaithful wives, in fact we enjoy reading about them. What we can't stand is when they don't suffer the consequences of their cheating, and no, that DOESN'T necessarily mean BTB, it can even result in reconciliation, but we can't stand them getting away with it.

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
There might have been 'consequences', SB

It's just that this story stopped before it got that far.

You say: "It's NOT that we can't stand to read about unfaithful wives, in fact we enjoy reading about them. What we can't stand is when they don't suffer the consequences of their cheating"

Surely the message Anonymous was trying to give remains the same. If you can't stand having wives not suffer, it seems rather silly to read the stories where they don't.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Deserves a better score

Detach for a moment your critical faculties from the

subject matter and one's emotional reaction to it.

This person can write well.

It's refreshing in itself to read along without tripping over

"your" and "you're" sorts of mistakes. Married Girl -23

knows how develop a story and tell it from a point of view.

She knows what "verisimility" is and how to conjure it

with words. It's not as easy as it sounds.

Keep writing Girl--

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too close to home.

I am really glad she had hot sex, in the bed where her husband slept, while he was gone doing what the Navy told him to do. This happened to my best friend while we were out on a WestPac many years ago, and, truth be told, he still isn't over it. To this day, he "HATES THE BITCH", especially when his PTSD is not well controlled. I, like many other readers here, find your writing abilities to be very good, and I DO enjoy reading the Loving Wives stories...when the wives and their "Jodie Fuck" lovers get what they deserve. Hopefully, her husband never finds out what a cunt he married, she didn't get pregnant, and..., well, that's another story, isn't it?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@luedon

I hate to reengage, but I have to defend myself against your claim.

There was no cuckold tag, so how could I know there would be no consequences without reading it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Oh God! Please stfu about consequences Sbrooks. You're just as bad as that oatzab guy. You do realize that there are many people who get away with cheating, right? Many. I have cheated on my husband for nearly 5 years with an old boyfriend. When he finally did catch me, he sulked for a while, but then he forgave me. Its behind us now, and the marriage is still in tact.

Fucking internet heroes. If you guys were real men, you wouldn't be up here whining about splitting categories. You wouldn't need stories to spout justice lessons so you can escape the real world. These stories would just be entertainment, like they are to us. You see, I don't give a crap about your stories, so I don't read them. You should do the same and stop getting on your period whenever a story doesn't go your way.

I enjoyed this story. I enjoy cheating women stories in which they have "extra marital fun". Please keep up the good work.

javmor79javmor79over 6 years ago
Questions.

Is this a one off, or is there actually more to the story? Would be interested to see what happens with the doctor, and how the couple deals with it. Does the husband find out, or does he stay blissfully ignorant? Is this the only affair she has, or is this the beginning?

Lots of questions. I would enjoy seeing more of this play out.

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
After the Westerns Bonanza

Randi might arrange for the writing legends to do a set of Biblical Stories especially for SB and the Moral Brigade.

Ritual stonings of adulterous wives would be an obligatory feature to be included in all stories.

Remember, Anonymous, "consequences" are things that a wife must "suffer". A consequence is not merely the result of an action. A consequence must always be negative, it can never be positive.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That's great.

Can we get a series of stories where your comments don't make you look like a petty twerp? That would be dandy. 🙄

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "Oh, god"

At least I have an ID. You can easily skip over my comments, you won't hurt my feelings.

aptonthe503aptonthe503over 6 years ago
First Person Account

Marriedgirl23 gave a first person account of the "night" she cheated.

It was actually an entire weekend, but what's a few days among cheaters right.

I agree with many that this wife is despicable as is her unscrupulous neighbor.

And for those anticipating a hard sequal, don't get your hopes up. I seriously doubt marriedgirl23 will write a hard first person account follow up about any punishment from her actions.

Overall, cliched story with nothing new. Scene elements seemed a bit contrived. Low marks from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

It’s not funny but it is. Way to many military spouses cheat when the other is away and way to many military guys will fuck married or single woman when around . Example Fleet Week

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "Here she (he) is again: @luedon"

I'm not a "cheating wife" OR a "cuckold husband," and I DON'T claim any moral superiority over anyone.

I PERSONALLY don't care for stories where cheaters don't suffer the consequences of their actions. If I know in advance, by the title, author, description, etc, I try to avoid them. I don't fault others for not sharing my views, but YOU, knowing my opinion, insists upon reading my comments, then bitching about them!

Again, I have an ID. If you see it, just skip over it, and spare yourself the aggravation.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 6 years ago
GOOD FIRST TIME WORK! *****

Welcome to the wonderful world of Literotica; a place where even good writers, (judged by amateur standards) post to be insulted for their hard work, which is always offered for free. Many of those doing the insulting don’t understand the meaning of the word “fiction” and if they did, they probably couldn’t come close to matching the work they like to trash. They surely don’t understand the concept of judging work on the quality of the writing and choice of storyline. For some strange reason, these folks try to get writers to stop posting here on LW.

Mg_23 I think you’ve done a very good job with this one, especially for your first time. I do wish you’d filled out your Bio a little better, for instance, are you male or female? If female, your depiction of the wife is very good; however, if you’re a guy, it’s outstanding. I’ve had some success writing female POV and I know it ain’t easy. Also knowing location allows us a better judgement on how you handle certain situations.

I hope to see more of your work, whether a sequel to ‘First Time’ or a new storyline. BTW don’t be misled by those who bitch about using the same hackneyed plots; they never got deep enough into creative writing to lean that every basic plot has been used many times over; we can only provide our own spin to work that’s sometimes centuries old.

GOOD LUCK and KEEP WRITING (if you enjoy it) cd

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cheating

Well she hasn't been married five minutes and she is fucking a neighbour, hope she made sure and got the morning after pill. Every time her husband goes away Ryan will be in there, maybe the first baby will be his.

Didn't take her long to be a whore, being a small community it wont be long before she has a queue.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 6 years ago
Good First LIT Submission ... BUT ...

Take Sweetie’s hubby out, along with Bull’s sweetie, and you have a shorter and tighter Erotic Coupling tale. Why? Because their ONLY function is to add tension, namely that there is no other reason these two should NOT have an erotic coupling (or seven.) There is NO accounting of how this several-day-long tryst changed ANYthing about Sweetie’s (or Bull’s) marital relationship (whether discovered or not.)

Unless, of course, the end-tease of a potential pregnancy were to obtain ... but that is NOT addressed in this portion.

Otherwise, it is OK, especially for a first submission. I would suggest a little more background rationale for Sweetie to auto-seduce, or for Bull to be more purposeful in seducing her. To blame Demon-Rum is fairly trite, despite a plausible erotic environment. The dark-house excuse to stretch out her enlightening discovery (as well as her twat) was very cute!

4*

writerjabwriterjabover 6 years ago
Fuckin awesome!

It's fiction -- hot fiction worthy of stroking to orgasm!

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
I'm with the Dreamer 100% on this

I agree with everything in CD's recent comment. like him, I find a story more interesting when I know a little more about the author and I implore MG23 to fill in the biographical details.

CD said "For some strange reason, these folks try to get writers to stop posting here on LW."

"These folks" would, of course, be mortified if writers did stop posting. They would have nothing to comment on, just as I would be mortified if they stopped commenting. (Just imagine how upsetting it would be if SBrooks was never heard from again.)

Lue

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
PS.

Further to CD's and my comments about authors' biographical notes:

The LW commentariat is something of a community. Even some of the anonymice have been saying the same things for long enough to become recognisable. But those with 'names' and a consistent line of opinion can often have on-going conversations from story to story.

It is for this reason that I like the biographical notes. Not only the details like sex and location, and the notes written at the bottom, but also the favourites list.

Whether an author or an unpublished commenter, their list of favoured authors and stories can tell so much about the person you are conversing with.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That ho & neighbor would have been gutted like a deer upon discovery of their cheating asses.

And they would not find the bodies.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Exciting

Great to have a hot neighbor to play with xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I THINK THE STORY IS EROTIC. I GAVE IT A 4+ (4.4/5.0 = 88% = A)

Re anon 10/28/17 "#metoo" The comment should be REMOVED forthwith because it implies that women lie when they report sexual assault. The user who wrote the comment should know better.

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Re Yechesem 10/28/17 (2 comments)

I fully agree with everything he says.

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Hi everybody,

This is a story. Everything in it is fictional. The young military wife from this story is as real as Wonder Woman or Chewbacca.

The story is meant to be read for fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it and hope there will be a part 2

Love the story and hope you continue to write don't mind the fanatic retards that vote 1* because they get upset from a fictional story. Why even bother reading it or vote on if it's not your thing? The comment section should be full of encouragement or constructive criticism for people who write us free stories instead of childish idiots who probably don't even read the stories and just vote 1* and a single line comment with nothing but insults its laughably pathetic. 5*s from me keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
the night I cheated

Let me guess--when you're at the gym, you feel free to dress completely inappropriately. How sad.

There's a better way to introduce yourself and give your dimensions without sounding like a Personals Ad. Another person in the story could call you by name (aha!!!) and your measurements can be revealed as, "he lovingly caressed (your) 32 inch a cup bobbies. Ah, but you get the drift.

Now, go smoke one.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 6 years ago
Not sure how the Antony’s can say they didn’t know what was coming

It was in the title!

They knew what it was, and read it anyway, then got more and more pissed off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
ReedRichards must be new

this is closet-cuck central - those virgins read every cheating wife story, spank their tiny monkey, then in a fit of shame and denial leave a nasty comment

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
No, Anonymouse, ReedRichards is not new

Have a look at his biography and the list of his published stories. Because he has a name, you can find out quite a bit about him and converse with him on that basis. If you also had a name, Anonymouse, we could converse with you on the same basis.

He writes excellent Romance stories. Many have the Red H against them. Loving Wives is not his normal territory, but his comment about this story and the commenters who "didn't know what's coming" is completely logical.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes, luedon, Reed is new, to Loving Wives at least

If he wasn't, he would already know the commentators in this category tend to squeal in outrage over every single cheating story, even though (or perhaps because of) most of the stories state pretty explicitly that they contain cheating.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous 11/01/17 Re: Cheating

You anti-Consequence guys keep beating the same dead drum.

Yes, we are well aware that there is cheating here. We're not outraged at cheating stories, that IS what we know we are going to get when we come here.

Our outrage is reserved for those stories where the cheaters don't suffer the consequences for their cheating, or worse, turn their husbands into cuckolds.

Lex1Lex1over 6 years ago
Here is the question for sbrooks

Why do you get outraged? Why is there so much emotion behind a story that doesn't go the way you want? Why do you feel that every story that doesn't have consequences is worthy of being belittled?

I know semantics will have you say, "I didn't SAY that they're worthy of being ridiculed" but the fact of the matter is that you guys do ridicule them. You call them "cuck crap" and argue about why THEY should go over to fetish even though this is the clear category for them.

Why? That's what's so confusing to outsiders looking in. These are just stories. Why is there so much animosity? So what if the husband enjoys seeing his wife have sex with other men. Who cares if she gets away with it and doesn't suffer "consequences". This group is the only group in all of Literotica who complain that the wayward woman be branded evil and taught a lesson. The only place I've seen this much animosity is on the blogs that rage on about Hillary or Donald. These stories affect nothing in the grand scheme of things.

Who cares?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Lex1

Maybe "outrage" is the wrong word. I was replying to an Anon and he/she used it, and I foolishly carried it on.

"Why do you feel that every story that doesn't have consequences is worthy of being belittled?" - Who's belittling? I have expressed my personal preference for stories where the cheater suffers consequences, and I'M belittled as being part of some "Morality Brigade."

"These are just stories." - So, what? Isn't it a compliment to the author that he/she has written a story that has so engaged me that I CARE about the characters? I don't read these stories for jack-off material, I have a good enough imagination to do it for myself!

As for the husbands who enjoy seeing their wives have sex with other men, I have long since given up the battle to move these stories. I only respond when I, and other readers who prefer Consequences stories are attacked, and told that WE belong in Fetish.

I am MORE than happy to leave you folks to your own devices, and rarely post "cuck crap" comments. One of my good friends here is stev2244, who has posted mostly Reconciliation stories, many of which where I disagreed with the reconciliation. I may be wrong, but I don't think I ever used the words "cuck" or "cuckold" in commenting on those stories.

Lex1Lex1over 6 years ago
Disagree.

"Laurel

PLEASE, if you're not gong to force this cuck crap into Fetish, give us our own Cheating and Consequences category.

Would you rather we pack up out Bitch Burning gear and invade Erotic Couplings? I'm sure we'd be as welcome there as the cuck stories are here!

Of course if we left the cuck stories would lose all there views."

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That was your comment on "Online Only?" by Lacey Love. You posted it on the 28th. You weren't being attacked. In fact, you were one of the first people who commented. So, I have to disagree with you there.

I don't want to stir up drama or expose you. I'm just curious as to why some of you guys become so personally invested in the direction these stories take. Why is it a must that there be consequences? Why is it that many readers in Loving Wives feel the need to exclude the "fun" from the "extra marital" part of the description?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
this is a story site to get your rocks off

Some folks get off on the shame, often subconscious, of reading hotwife stories while others get off on the actual hotwives or bulls or sex or whatever.

Admins in their wisdom know the tent is big enough for bulls, hotwives, cucks and closet-cucks so the category remains open the way it always has been.

amischiefmakeramischiefmakerover 6 years ago
Loved it!

5* (except don't EVER call a 34 year old "old" again -- ha, ha)

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Lex1

You conveniently ignored the Anonymous "FOR CUCK HATERS" comment two prior to mine.

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
My apologies, Anonymous

I was too quick to leap to ReedRichards' defence where there was no no slight intended on your part. As you say, "Reed is new, to Loving Wives at least."

But your comment did bring one of the more thoughtful commentators into the conversation. Lex1 always adds something positive to the commentaries.

Just as the reasons for wandering wives to commit adultery are always interesting, so too are the reasons for many commentators to want those wives to *suffer* *consequences* equally interesting.

It's all part of life's rich tapestry.

Lue

* SBrooks preferred words. Justice is not done unless wandering wives "suffer".

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck SHIT.

Lex1Lex1over 6 years ago
Didn't ignore it, just missed it.

But, it was ONE to the THREE that were bashing the author before you.

But you're right. I did miss it. However, it didn't attack you. And to that note, you didn't attack the COMMENTER, you insulted the STORY TYPE.

Like I said, I don't want to bash you. I'm just interested in why there is such high emotion behind those stories. Why is it impossible to exist without insulting each others stories? You aren't the only side who does it, you are just the more vocal side.

Just interested, that's all. I doubt I'll get an answer, because both sides pretend that they don't care about the other side. But ya'll do.

Sorry Marriedgirl. I know I hijacked your comment section. Apologies.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@luedon

I have to admit, lue, that you DO know how to push my buttons!

I KNOW that you MUST know that "suffer consequences" has NOTHING to do with "suffer" as you try to make it seem that I am saying.

Here is the definition of "suffer consequences" or "suffer the consequences": to be punished for what one has done.

You make it seem like I'm demanding some kind of torture for cheating wives. If my employee cheats on his/her expense account, is it out of line to insist that they "suffer the consequence" of being fired?

Not to risk invoking the spirit of the not dearly departed, swingerjoe, but if my child stays out past curfew, or uses the car without permission, and I make them "suffer the consequence" of being grounded, am I wrong?

luedonluedonover 6 years ago
Words, SB

Reveal deep-seated motives.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The reason sbrooks and the

rest of the closet bunch react with so much emotion is simple; it triggers something. Sadly, they were conditioned to repress and feel shame for feasting on these stories but they devour them nonetheless, much like the fat kid bingeing on Yodels then feeling ashamed after.

Sex stories are escapism for most readers who by and large have pretty normal sex lives and can separate fantasy from reality. But for some readers these stories are a form of therapy as they work out trauma or sex/psych/soc problems - the line between fantasy and reality blurs, hence the elevated emotional response.

Well adjusted people read a cheating wife story and like or dislike it but they don't fly off the handle. Well adjusted people avoid cheating stories altogether if it triggers them in a way that upsets them. Therefore, closet cases seek out these stories to get triggered/feel ashamed because flying off the handle is their nut.

Well adjusted people understand that these stories aren't real.

Asking them to explain why they react with so much strong emotion will only get deflection, accusation, etc - they are unable to understand or admit their own motivations. Let them work out their issues by reading and commenting on hundreds of stories since for them, these fantasies substitute for reality.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous

WOW!

Please tell me the back of the matchbook mail-order school granted you the psychology degree that enables you to MISDIAGNOSE me without ever meeting me.

I'm not repressing or feeling shame for anything, and I have no "trauma or sex/psych/soc problems" that need working out, thank you very much.

I am well aware that this is not reality, and as I have said many times, it is a tribute to the many good writers here that they create characters and situations that I care about.

I have no "issues to work out." I have been happily married for over 43 years with an adult son and own my own home. I am retired so I have a bit more time on my hands than most and enjoy reading these, and other stories.

I am a valued member of my local church and lead several worship services a year.

I hereby apologize if I have offended anyone by any real or implied criticism of non-consequence stories, I will TRY to avoid it in the future. If you find that my comments continue to offend your sensibilities, I have an ID, just skip over them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
re: anonymous-the reason s brooks and ..............

Well adjusted people don't rant about what others think on a porn site either. Well adjusted people don't even read porn, they got better thinks to do with their time. So fuck off anon, you must not be well adjusted since you rant about others and spend your time on a porn site. Moron!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
re:anonymous-wow

Yeah, we come here every day to look for good erotica not shit you prefer. ONE STAR. That score is closer to reality than what you gave it. Fuck off ass wipe. Like sbrooks stated you don't decide why we come to this site. Don't like it, nobody is forcing you to read the comments, but let's admit it, you like the moaning and bitching, makes you feel important.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
touched a nerve ehh cuckies?

Plenty of well adjusted folks read porn you stupid fucking moron, only they don't piss and moan and snivel about how much they hate it, they just do something else if they don't like a particular story.

Noone needs a psych degree to figure out what you simpletons broadcast with every crying comment about "these kinds of stories are terrible Laurel, please make them go away" while you read and comment on every fucking one of them. It is as plain as fucking day to the rest of us.

You fucktards choose to read cheating wife stories because it triggers your sensitve little sensibilities and makes your little peepee sing - the rest of us aren't judging you morons for that since it is normal, we're judging you for bleating and squealing "take them away!" while reading them all.

Chew on that you special snowflakes, food for thought as to why anyone would spend hundreds of hours reading and commenting on fuck stories they don't like. Seems like you imbeciles think you're gonna change the world one cheating wife story at a time - so who is the deluded self-important schmuck in this scenario?

hunghandsumhunghandsumover 6 years ago
Ch 02 Aly continues...

Well written and I can't wait for the next chapter! I look forward to more stories as well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hello

Hello my new used condom eater. This sucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good job Marriedgirl

I can see a set of twins in your future...

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