All Comments on 'The Night of the Comet'

What utter RUBBISH, when is randy going to be fired and the admin let GREAT writers post when they want, not when SHE says so!

That was different. A little self serving perhaps but different

The upside is its only one side!!!

there are too many whys in his brain to put a psych-eval on him, TK U MLJ LV NV

Was this written as a real cuck’s fantasy, the only way he could ever be what he wanted to be, or just to pull the anonies’ chains? :)

Either wat, meh.

The story ended right here and I hit the door... Because the story was over

No, it was a cuck's revenge! Maybe via a Deus ex Machina, but a revenge nonetheless!

Once again, Randi doesn't decide when good (or any) stories get posted.

Why not just leave? - Then we wouldn't have the story, LOL!

Let's not forget, he may have, grudgingly, gone along with her cuckolding him, but he refused "clean-up" duty and servicing her bulls.

Its just a story for petes sake,Just read, laugh and enjoy and go on to the next story.

but 5 stars for being brave enough to explore an unwilling cuckold theme, many writers on here claim they want "new ideas" but seem to shy away from the mild mannered characters who can't or won't for the time being leave their cuckoldress.

"a boiler plate rendering" is one such story all be it more realistic than most. it's a vast untapped resource for great "scenes" of betrayal, selfishness and unusual confrontations between the various characters.

please try again but with a more realistic ending.

He didn't do nothing but stand around and get handed a balancing of the scales. He was taking whatever his wife dished out, and now he's taking what the comet dished out. He's still just a passive opportunist who lacked the resilience and self reliance to solve his own problems.

I get this was just some fun irony, but the guy started out as a pussy with a dick too small for his wife, and he's ending as a pussy with a dick still too small for his wife, but better than nothing in her new world. Some consolation.

and then you come out with "Try to enjoy any way."

And that is why the pedants with their fire-torches are marching up the hill towards your castle.

A small matter of a space.

" any way " (with a space) is accepted to mean 'by any method'.

" anyway " (sans space) is to mean despite something, eg the Pulitzer non-nomination.

Wait a bit, my torch has gone out.

Cheers, and thanks for this novel take on the genre.

Kilroy.

Ugh!😁

I have no brain except I'm an astrophysicist.

My wife and I are amoral and live together for no reason in particular.

There was a red herring. I mean comet.

Nailed it, right?

Well, at least you tried ! I still can't figure out why the guy would stay married to this woman !

The wonderful dong shrinking dildo disintegrating rock from outer space! That was a stroke of genius. I'll give you props for writing something different. It's a farce, and I enjoy a good farce. Hit it again and let's see how that one plays out. Look forward to your next.

illiterate cuck shit.

and thin-skinned too, judging by his little runt at the start. if you are so bothered by the comments, turn them off or post your shit elsewhere. or better, stop writing.

I guess a lot of commenters didn't read the story through and get the twist. Too bad.

3*

To all who have commented to this story I say "Thank you". Yes I could turn off the comments section (if I knew how), but I wont. T the wonderful Anonn that wishes to know the size of my cock, use your best guess. Negative comments don't upset me any more since I have networked with other writers and their feedback is what I need more than anything else. I wish that Anonn commenters would take the time to establish accounts with user names and make it a little more personal. Once again thank you and keep reading.

Was a little different but hey that was the author showing some creativity...right. Sort of Sci-Fi/fantasy meets cuck world....lol. A 4 for the effort.

Read. It a couple times, but now I get it. Good one.

Amusing fantasy piece, which makes for a refreshing change from the usual dross in this genre, where gems are becoming rarer to find.

which worked very well.

1*

What a waste of energy, do us a favor and get a box of crayons and some scrape paper, then put it in the "round file". Trash (0-Stars).

OK , so this is a fantasy style Loving Wife's story ....... that doesn't mean you have to write rubbish.

I don't care that you don't like criticism, maybe go back to school and LEARN BASIC ENGLISH!!!!!!

Jesus, your a sensitive little bitch, aren't you?

Interesting "What if" scenario!!! Better that the size queens pussies become so big, that they feel nothing...

What a pile of nonsense, you start off with an interesting looking tale and it gets more unrealistic and over the top as it unwinds..no man would have spoken, even looked at her again or be in her presence with what she did.You have a knack to take promising and turn it into garbage....0 stars...JZK