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All Comments on 'The Night Out Ch. 01'

by Tiffany8

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austin_voyaustin_voyalmost 11 years ago
Weak everything

The plot was pretty much none existent, the tense really doesn't work and it was just too quick and stuttering. Keep trying but have someone read it first.

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