All Comments on 'The Nude Pioneer Ch. 03a'

by AvoidingRealWork

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
abc101abc101over 12 years ago
really good story

You write really well. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The Score

You write well, but a story like this gets a 1 if there is no continuation, and this is the first story of yours I've read. First, I checked to find if it was part of a series. Then 5!

Sorry, but that's the most that's allowed.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous