All Comments on 'The Office'

I loved it all. Especially the unseen revenge with Rachel. The ending, of course, was logical finish to things but including Megan with Lisa was a nice surprise. Keep up the good writing.

nonconsent stories on the site. Every now and again a real gem of a story appears and this is one of those. Not broken up into fifteen small chapters either! I think this is a surefire top story and had everything from reluctance to rape. Loved it. Thanks for the time you undoubtedly spent on this wonderful story.

Wyatt

Honestly did not want it to end.

Can't wait for the next submission.

Please keep it up.

Excellent work... seems built for continuation. Will there be further chapters or seguays into other themes?

I liked the way that you had the other girls team up against Rachel. That was an unusual twist.

Except for the odd error and weird dangling sentences, this was really well done and very, very hot. Loved the revenge on Rachel. Thank you for the hotness!

one of the best things I have ever read. It was hot, it was violent, I loved the revenge bit and, really, other then the odd spelling errors, it was mind blowing. And oh my god, the bit with Angela being slammed around. <3333

Keep it up with the amazing stories,

~Robyn

rarely have I been kept so riveted by anything but a bestseller. Fantastic storyline which really keeps you engaged. Bravo!

You use "wondering" instead of "wandering." It really got distracting. Some other obvious typos too. Still, very well done.

Lots of typos/grammatical errors. But all in all great story!

The second time around. Read this once almost a year ago and it's still just as good as it was then. Shame it's not higher on the list in the hall of fame.

My favourite story on Literotica. Great idea, decent writing, well told.