All Comments on 'The Office Affair'

Like my first stories, this is way too short. It is also pretty good! It's a real cocktease of a story. Nobody likes to be teased for long!

Take paragraph that starts "She loves when he fucks her mouth" and stretch it out to two or three times the length it is now. The description is good, a great start to a description of an amazing blowjob. The tension is established, but this blowjob deseres more. You don't have to finish him (although, who doesn't love oral sex?). But you have made a good start, so expand on this. I'll be back soon for more.