All Comments on 'The Office Ch. 01'

by KittenYume

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chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
i hope there will be more

loved it more chapters please

LongJohnSilver69LongJohnSilver69over 10 years ago
More please

always love when a dominant takes charge and the submissive is helpless to protest and succumbs....

eaglejet1eaglejet1over 10 years ago

Dang, that was hot!! Thank you so much for sharing this hot, wonderful piece with us. Five stars from me, and welcome to Lit!!! I would love to read more from you.

KittenYumeKittenYumeover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for all the loves and comments. I have Ch. 02 and Ch. 03 submitted. So now its just a waiting game. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Video?

Kailey should discover that Mr. Keys got her submission to him on video.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Can't wait for the next ones

Very well written kept my attention, can't wait for the next one. It's been awhile since I read a good BDSM.

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

this is more of a nonconsen/relunct basically rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
loved it

oh wow that was hot!

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