All Comments on 'The Office Ch. 06'

what a great series, well written and truly erotic ... the whole series really paints a vivid picture in one's imagination, more than the words ... I can see, hear, taste, and smell the whole story ... well done!

jim

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Well, you have certainly mastered the cliffhanger, much to my chargin.

continue ... You're fans need more ... ;)

Simply an awesome story ... I can't wait to read the next chapter ...

Kkid

What a wonderful series. One of the best I have ever encountered on Literotica. I'm anxiously waiting for more.

This story has the suspense of a detective story. The story builds to a climax — figuratively and almost literally. There ought to be another chapter, one that attains that sexual climax.

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The following passages are just a sample of those that powerfully convey the intense yearning of a woman, the yearning centered in her loins. They convey well the feelings of profound anticipation, of the highly-charged emptiness of a female awaiting fulfillment, in the presence of a male who offers that possibility.

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(The emphasis below is mine.)

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<i>My nose picks up my <b>scent</b>, pungent from my wetness. Between my legs my pussy is wide and <b>gaping</b>. The slight burn in my legs is growing but it's a dull and miniscule ache compared to the one between my thighs. My hand is everywhere in my <b>sopping bush</b>. My dark blonde hairs wet against my <b>engorged vagina</b>. Each time my fingers exit and then reenter; I give a tiny <b>moan</b>. </i>

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<i>Holding him tightly, I splay my hand flat against the wall before withdrawing my <b>quivering lips</b> from his member. My legs unbend as I stand up, my one hand still holding my cunt while it's fingers dip into my vagina. My suede boots are cool against my warm skin; my feverish body is covered in a film of sweat. The undersides of my <b>tits are slick</b> and as I stand the motion causes them to <b>sway</b> under my dress. </i>

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<i>My bush is clumped together, stuck by my juices to my skin. My untanned skin is red from my arousal and my inner lips are jutting out. Between them the <b>hood over my clit is pulled back</b>, leaving my cunt totally naked. I tug my dress higher until my lower body is completely uncovered. Closing my eyes, I slowly bend my knees pushing my ass towards his waiting cock. </i>

This story reminds me of "Office Games" by Dark Pen in that both involve a male office worker who is a secret admirer of sorts of a female co-worker. The former manipulates the latter with messages and spies on her. Yet, they are different in many ways. But, if you like one, you might like the other.

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That story is not available on Literotica, but at www.writingsofleviticus.thekinkyserver.com/DarkPen/OfficeGames.html. Warning: some BDSM and water sports.

A regular good hard fucking at work would really boost office morale.

Tess (UK)